loch Ness Monster
Nessie has been sighted.33 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
"Perfect vision is required" could be the requirements for those who saw ET. We have a monster in Vermont who "Perfect vision is required" The most recent alleged sighting that looked real at first but those scientific explainers said they had actually made waves that looked like that. Hopefully, the two boys who had the Perfect vision required did not hear the science of it all. I had the Perfect vision required until science was sounded...bwaa
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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"Perfect vision is required" could be the requirements for those who saw ET. We have a monster in Vermont who "Perfect vision is required" The most recent alleged sighting that looked real at first but those scientific explainers said they had actually made waves that looked like that. Hopefully, the two boys who had the Perfect vision required did not hear the science of it all. I had the Perfect vision required until science was sounded...bwaa
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Yes, science can upset the 'apple cart.'
Thank you for reading and reviewing this fanciful piece.
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***chuckle***
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well now, Nellie raises her head once again! (LOL) Love it! Your ABC poem is well done. I have only one thing to mention, and it's not really a suggestion, just more of a comment in case you were not aware... The last line of an ABC poem does not have to start with a letter that follows the previous one.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Well now, Nellie raises her head once again! (LOL) Love it! Your ABC poem is well done. I have only one thing to mention, and it's not really a suggestion, just more of a comment in case you were not aware... The last line of an ABC poem does not have to start with a letter that follows the previous one.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thanks for the reminder. Yes, I did know that. The funny thing is that I got so caught up doing the lines ABC fashion that I ended up with six lines. So when I got rid of the sixth, I was left with a decent fifth line in the letter sequence. I appreciate you looking out for me. Have a great day, Dawn.
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My pleasure -- you have a great day too!
Comment from emajor942
Interesting imagery in this piece. It leaves room for the reader to create their own image but with guidance. Also, an interesting topic as makes you think about the legend of the monster.
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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Interesting imagery in this piece. It leaves room for the reader to create their own image but with guidance. Also, an interesting topic as makes you think about the legend of the monster.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the review. Best wishes.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Only the privileged few, indeed! No one who has gone looking for her ever seems to see her.
Nice job with this ABC poetry challenge. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Only the privileged few, indeed! No one who has gone looking for her ever seems to see her.
Nice job with this ABC poetry challenge. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you for all the stars and the comments. Yes, she seems to be very elusive. Thank you also for the good wishes.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Deserving of a 6 for sure! This ABC poem is skillfully written, delightfully lighthearted, and amusing. Did you know that there used to be a Loch
Ness Investigation Bureau? I'm serious!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Deserving of a 6 for sure! This ABC poem is skillfully written, delightfully lighthearted, and amusing. Did you know that there used to be a Loch
Ness Investigation Bureau? I'm serious!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the stars and the green cross (the sixth star). That is a high honor.
I may read a little more about Nessie after learning from you that there once was a whole investigating bureau dedicated to her/him.
Comment from evilynne
Great little poem about our favorite monster lurking in Loch Ness. It follows the rules, is well worded and makes us smile. The accompanying picture is great. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Great little poem about our favorite monster lurking in Loch Ness. It follows the rules, is well worded and makes us smile. The accompanying picture is great. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Evi, for your review, comments, and all the stars. Thanks also for the good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Lotty is rarely seen these days but the myth continues and brings in the tourists so the Scottish are happy, you made me smile with your clever write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Lotty is rarely seen these days but the myth continues and brings in the tourists so the Scottish are happy, you made me smile with your clever write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Dolly, for your review and all the stars. I am most happy that I made you smile. That's the best reward.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'loch Ness Monster', is an extremely written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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'loch Ness Monster', is an extremely written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the review, all the stars, well wishes, and especially for the crossed fingers.
leather, you deserved all of them.
Bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this ABC poem. I may enter the contest before too long. I like the way you build up to the end. I like the last line the best as it is a brilliant summation of the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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i like this ABC poem. I may enter the contest before too long. I like the way you build up to the end. I like the last line the best as it is a brilliant summation of the poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your review, ratings, and comment. This was my first attempt at an ABC poem, so I am no pro, but it was more than some other styles I've tried. Best wishes if you give it a try.
Comment from nomi338
The suspension of disbelief will open your eyes to marvelous visions hidden from eyes that will never observe the wonders and mysteries that inhabit our planet and make life so wonderful to the childlike and totally innocent dreamer.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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The suspension of disbelief will open your eyes to marvelous visions hidden from eyes that will never observe the wonders and mysteries that inhabit our planet and make life so wonderful to the childlike and totally innocent dreamer.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2022
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Thank you, nomi338, for your review and generous rating. May we all keep a little of the child in ourselves.
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You are welcome. Never stop dreaming.
