Sweet Memories
Missing my brother.33 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Belinda, the love and bond between siblings is strong.
Your poem reads and flows well, and I could feel the love that
your hold for him. Of special note:
With happy smiles, fishing days, work and so much more
It lines the hallways of my mind like smoke, forgotten lore.
(Very nice. Good descriptive writing.)
Well chosen photo ... makes time stand still. A heartfelt poem.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Hello Belinda, the love and bond between siblings is strong.
Your poem reads and flows well, and I could feel the love that
your hold for him. Of special note:
With happy smiles, fishing days, work and so much more
It lines the hallways of my mind like smoke, forgotten lore.
(Very nice. Good descriptive writing.)
Well chosen photo ... makes time stand still. A heartfelt poem.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I definitely feel time stands still when I look at the photos of him. He is loved.
Comment from karenina
I'm so sorry for your loss. You honor your brother beautifully with this poem. I believe he is in your heart and on your mind as you hold on to the memories and thank God that you were ever so blessed as to have him in your life!
"It lines the hallways of my mind like smoke, forgotten lore..."
Such a perfect line. I feel the very same way!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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I'm so sorry for your loss. You honor your brother beautifully with this poem. I believe he is in your heart and on your mind as you hold on to the memories and thank God that you were ever so blessed as to have him in your life!
"It lines the hallways of my mind like smoke, forgotten lore..."
Such a perfect line. I feel the very same way!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to share your words of encouragement with me. I appreciate them so much.
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You are so welcome!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
The worst part of living is dying. I, as so many others, have lost ones whom I have cherished. Your words only begin to express what one has to endure in the days without their loved one.
So sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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The worst part of living is dying. I, as so many others, have lost ones whom I have cherished. Your words only begin to express what one has to endure in the days without their loved one.
So sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and for taking the time to write a review. I means a lot.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. So sorry for your loss. So sad to lose loved ones. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Very beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. So sorry for your loss. So sad to lose loved ones. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your words of encouragement. It means a lot. I appreciate your review.
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Your welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very well written and intended. Sorry for your loss, if indeed, I read this being about your late husband or date but hopefully not a son. Be well. ..................
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Very well written and intended. Sorry for your loss, if indeed, I read this being about your late husband or date but hopefully not a son. Be well. ..................
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. He was my brother.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I am sorry for your loss, Belinda.
-Thanks for sharing the photo and poem.
-I hope it has brought some comfort by doing so.
-You paint a good word picture of the many
admirable qualities your brother had.
-Like many of us, he had admirable qualities
and some obstacles in his path, but also "of battles won."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-I'm sure your brother would be pleased with your tribute.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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-I am sorry for your loss, Belinda.
-Thanks for sharing the photo and poem.
-I hope it has brought some comfort by doing so.
-You paint a good word picture of the many
admirable qualities your brother had.
-Like many of us, he had admirable qualities
and some obstacles in his path, but also "of battles won."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-I'm sure your brother would be pleased with your tribute.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for saying so. I appreciate your words of encouragement and for writing the review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is achingly beautiful, written from the heart and dripping with affection and loss. I think it's in our winsome, melancholy moods that we recall the sweetest, most inspirational memories, especially with relation to our loved ones. Your connection is clear and binding, and your poem is lovely.
Mike
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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This is achingly beautiful, written from the heart and dripping with affection and loss. I think it's in our winsome, melancholy moods that we recall the sweetest, most inspirational memories, especially with relation to our loved ones. Your connection is clear and binding, and your poem is lovely.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you Mike for taking the time to write a review and for the encouraging words. They mean a lot.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful tribute to a loved one. You write with genuine, sincere and heart-felt emotion. The grief you feel reaches to the reader's heart. Very well expressed. Best wishes, and I do hope the sharpness of the pain will ease.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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A beautiful tribute to a loved one. You write with genuine, sincere and heart-felt emotion. The grief you feel reaches to the reader's heart. Very well expressed. Best wishes, and I do hope the sharpness of the pain will ease.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. The sharpness has lessened. It?ll be a year tomorrow. Thank you for the review and the encouragement.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What a beautiful tribute to your brother. As long as you keep him in your thoughts and heart, he is with you forever.
I am so sorry for your loss.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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What a beautiful tribute to your brother. As long as you keep him in your thoughts and heart, he is with you forever.
I am so sorry for your loss.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your review and for your words of encouragement. I appreciate your time so much.
Comment from C2
What a beautifully written heartfelt poem. I teared up halfway through it. It made me stop and give thanks for my spouse and reminded me to try not to take a single day for granted. Thanks for sharing it!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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What a beautifully written heartfelt poem. I teared up halfway through it. It made me stop and give thanks for my spouse and reminded me to try not to take a single day for granted. Thanks for sharing it!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I completely understand. I wish so many times I?d gotten to spend time with him again after he moved back home. I miss him very much. I appreciate your review and I?m so thankful you were moved with emotion as you read it. It?s powerful when that happens.
