Sweet Memories
Missing my brother.33 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
This poem is a simply beautiful tribute to your brother. The photo is so charming and the poem is very touching. Im so glad I got to get this very loving glimpse at your brother. Very nice work and short but sweet author's note is perfect
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This poem is a simply beautiful tribute to your brother. The photo is so charming and the poem is very touching. Im so glad I got to get this very loving glimpse at your brother. Very nice work and short but sweet author's note is perfect
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much! I?m so glad you liked the tribute. I appreciate the encouragement.
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My pleasure
Comment from Gunner Lil
Excellent writing. Easy read, A super flow and pace. A poem that many of us can relate to. I think of Mom and Dad daily Sorry for your loss.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Excellent writing. Easy read, A super flow and pace. A poem that many of us can relate to. I think of Mom and Dad daily Sorry for your loss.
Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review.
Comment from royowen
I can't begin to imagine what life is like without one's life partner at one's side. The loneliness of that. Relationships can be hard work, the love so strong that whatever it takes is worth the struggle, some people can't be replaced. beautifully written Belinda, bless you, may God's compassion be with you, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I can't begin to imagine what life is like without one's life partner at one's side. The loneliness of that. Relationships can be hard work, the love so strong that whatever it takes is worth the struggle, some people can't be replaced. beautifully written Belinda, bless you, may God's compassion be with you, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you Roy. The poem is about my brother. A devastating loss. Sudden. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.
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I?m so sorry Belinda, my sympathy and condolences
Comment from Ric Myworld
AS I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But even a simple mind like can be touched by meaningful words straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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AS I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But even a simple mind like can be touched by meaningful words straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for reading it and for writing a thoughtful review.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
How awful that you lost your brother. This poem reflects how much you loved him and miss him. It is beautifully written and held my interest from beginning to end. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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How awful that you lost your brother. This poem reflects how much you loved him and miss him. It is beautifully written and held my interest from beginning to end. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you Lilly. I appreciate your review so much.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Good rhyming and well-chosen words to describe how much you miss your brother. Both of my brothers have passed away, and I know how you feel. thankful for the hope of seeing them again in eternity.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Good rhyming and well-chosen words to describe how much you miss your brother. Both of my brothers have passed away, and I know how you feel. thankful for the hope of seeing them again in eternity.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes ma?am. I?m looking forward to that happy reunion. I?m sure you are as well. Thank you so much for the review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This touching, well-written poem really resonates with me because I lost my only brother about a year and a half ago--then lost his lovely wife two weeks later! Through the use of specific details, you have painted a lovely picture of your brother.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This touching, well-written poem really resonates with me because I lost my only brother about a year and a half ago--then lost his lovely wife two weeks later! Through the use of specific details, you have painted a lovely picture of your brother.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I?m so sorry to hear of your losses so close together. Hugs.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I'm sorry for your loss. It sounds like a great relationship.
The last rhyme seems a little forced. Maybe 'all the days' demise.' (?)
I apologize if I'm out of line suggesting word changes. Not being a poet, I don't know the protocol.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I'm sorry for your loss. It sounds like a great relationship.
The last rhyme seems a little forced. Maybe 'all the days' demise.' (?)
I apologize if I'm out of line suggesting word changes. Not being a poet, I don't know the protocol.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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You?re not out of line at all. Suggestions and comments are the breathe of words shared. Thank you so much for taking the time to review the poem.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a beautiful poem that leaves a heartfelt sentiment.
I am sorry for your loss. I do not know your pain, but it seems as though poetry has become an outlet for you to express you intimate feelings for your brother. I appreciate and applaud your honesty and openness. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful poem that leaves a heartfelt sentiment.
I am sorry for your loss. I do not know your pain, but it seems as though poetry has become an outlet for you to express you intimate feelings for your brother. I appreciate and applaud your honesty and openness. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your words of encouragement.
Comment from Raul1
This is very nice of you to dedicate your poem to a family member. I bet that he was a nice guy. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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This is very nice of you to dedicate your poem to a family member. I bet that he was a nice guy. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the six star rating! Your encouragement is greatly appreciated.
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You're welcome!
