One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- cute- good presentation- about summer storm- heart warming storyline- good information in your notes - learned something different - good job
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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I like your poem- cute- good presentation- about summer storm- heart warming storyline- good information in your notes - learned something different - good job
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I hope you will have a wonderful day. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from aryr
A great haiku and some very sound advise, Gypsy. I loved the picture, very rarely does one capture lightening. I enjoyed the advise you gave in your narrative notes. Your words definitely provided truth in the holding of one's breath. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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A great haiku and some very sound advise, Gypsy. I loved the picture, very rarely does one capture lightening. I enjoyed the advise you gave in your narrative notes. Your words definitely provided truth in the holding of one's breath. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your insightful and kind review, especially coming from you. Blessed be and hugs. :)
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from karenina
Nice! I was that child who adored fierce thunderstorms! What a thrilling light and sound show His put on! My dad used to say "The angels are bowling...and lightning happens when they get a " strike!"
Smile.
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Nice! I was that child who adored fierce thunderstorms! What a thrilling light and sound show His put on! My dad used to say "The angels are bowling...and lightning happens when they get a " strike!"
Smile.
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. Karenina, I appreciate your excellent review. Hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Hugs back...
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that's pretty scary! I can imagine that little girl being frightened enough to hold her breath. What a clever way to show the emotion of fear and expectation of the loud Boom!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Yes, that's pretty scary! I can imagine that little girl being frightened enough to hold her breath. What a clever way to show the emotion of fear and expectation of the loud Boom!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review. Storms can be scary but I like them. I wouldn't line to be struck by lightning, though. LoL Love and Peace
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from royowen
I can remember my eldest grandson, who was a little afraid of thunder when little, he called it "Chunda" but this is very clever Gypsy, it's like the silence between the beat of the heart, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I can remember my eldest grandson, who was a little afraid of thunder when little, he called it "Chunda" but this is very clever Gypsy, it's like the silence between the beat of the heart, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review. Hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Bless you
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the image you paint with your words. The colours and picture you chose match your haiku, but it would be equally powerful without them. I kind of feel sorry for the little girl.
Thanks for the info below. I'm particularly interested in what you say about counting the seconds between lightning and thunder to calculate the distance. I'd heard about it, but didn't know the exact equivalence.
A pleasure as usual.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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I love the image you paint with your words. The colours and picture you chose match your haiku, but it would be equally powerful without them. I kind of feel sorry for the little girl.
Thanks for the info below. I'm particularly interested in what you say about counting the seconds between lightning and thunder to calculate the distance. I'd heard about it, but didn't know the exact equivalence.
A pleasure as usual.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars! You're very kind.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."Picasso
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Well deserved. Hugs.