"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Hi, Ricky. Is this a picture of your son, Jason? I have read so many of your stories about him that I sort of have a picture in my mind of what he may have looked like. Sorry, I should have read your footnotes first and I would have known the picture was one of Cleo's artworks. This is well-written as usual.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Hi, Ricky. Is this a picture of your son, Jason? I have read so many of your stories about him that I sort of have a picture in my mind of what he may have looked like. Sorry, I should have read your footnotes first and I would have known the picture was one of Cleo's artworks. This is well-written as usual.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I have presented two pictures of my son as my artwork in my many pieces I've written.
I will send a new one out soon so you can see him!
And thanks as always,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the section comparing life to a long, drawn out note. It can be the best music in the world, but we still don't want to listen to it continuously. In life, we need to seek variety and evolution. Nicely written.
Mike
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I love the section comparing life to a long, drawn out note. It can be the best music in the world, but we still don't want to listen to it continuously. In life, we need to seek variety and evolution. Nicely written.
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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The last statement variety evolution is very powerful and yes very true.
Thanks Michael for stopping by.
And, this is one of my more enjoyable writes.
Ricky