A Penny for you Fought
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Dangerous Sport"Dragon Dance Chronicles Book 2
5 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
I love this story, Mike. I try to read and keep up, but they are so well written and prologued they stand-alone, which I like. I'm partial to the character Smiff. He is super definable and easy to read. Great stuff.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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I love this story, Mike. I try to read and keep up, but they are so well written and prologued they stand-alone, which I like. I'm partial to the character Smiff. He is super definable and easy to read. Great stuff.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, John :-). Almost finished with this one now.
Mike
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent writing. I truly enjoyed reading another chapter of your interesting story. I can't wait to find out where you are going with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Excellent writing. I truly enjoyed reading another chapter of your interesting story. I can't wait to find out where you are going with this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you :-). We're entering the home straight now so only 2 or 3 more to go!
Mike
Comment from royowen
Oh there's a fifth column in the camp, Napoleon was right! It's not the enemy one faces, it's the one in your midst. But he seems genuine enough, but how can one trust anyone completely. But the character Rozlyn is a smart, but tainted cookie, well done, Mike, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Oh there's a fifth column in the camp, Napoleon was right! It's not the enemy one faces, it's the one in your midst. But he seems genuine enough, but how can one trust anyone completely. But the character Rozlyn is a smart, but tainted cookie, well done, Mike, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thanks Roy :-). Almost at the end of this mad tale (I have two more Companions stories waiting to be finished, polished and posted though).
Mike
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really like this story. I can't wait for more.
He opened his mouth to speak and I leaned forward, smashing his lips with my forehead. (comma needed after 'speak' because of two different subjects.)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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I really like this story. I can't wait for more.
He opened his mouth to speak and I leaned forward, smashing his lips with my forehead. (comma needed after 'speak' because of two different subjects.)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Aha! Many thanks for the eagle eye! We're heading I to the closing straight for this story now :-).
Mike
Comment from Beri Bee
The dialogue really shines! The pacing is great! My two cents: 1) When you write "spec... special" It read as "speck... special," since I didn't know what word was coming; 2) I love how you begin en media res, but your dialogue is so compelling, I'd like to hear a line, any line, at the beginning of the first punishing (first paragraph). That is all, sir. Well done! Thanks!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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The dialogue really shines! The pacing is great! My two cents: 1) When you write "spec... special" It read as "speck... special," since I didn't know what word was coming; 2) I love how you begin en media res, but your dialogue is so compelling, I'd like to hear a line, any line, at the beginning of the first punishing (first paragraph). That is all, sir. Well done! Thanks!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, my friend :-). We're heading into the final straight for this tale now. Thoughts always appreciated.
Mike
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my pleasure! It will be fun to go back and read the whole thing straight through.