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Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "100 Years Old"
Is the living really alive and living?
2 total reviews
Comment from
Fleedleflump
This was actually a lot of fun - almost aspirational, in terms of what may have happened and how life will be. I love 'escalator highway' and the comment about being bolder when you're older. Great piece :-)
Mike
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
Thanks again Michael and there will be another part to this later on.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from
Regina Elliott
Very imaginative and confident. I imagine being
a Pulitzer Prize winner, lol!
I love the charm of this poem.
I think, "escalator highway,"
is wondrously creative.
Blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
Why thank you and escalator highway is getting a lot of attention you're the second person that loved it!
Can you imagine no more having to walk?
No need to really ride the bicycle but we can still use escalator with it!
One day we'll all have our own little flying saucer!
Doctor Ricky
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