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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from Fleedleflump
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This was actually a lot of fun - almost aspirational, in terms of what may have happened and how life will be. I love 'escalator highway' and the comment about being bolder when you're older. Great piece :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
    Thanks again Michael and there will be another part to this later on.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Very imaginative and confident. I imagine being
a Pulitzer Prize winner, lol!
I love the charm of this poem.
I think, "escalator highway,"
is wondrously creative.
Blessings to you. ~

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
    Why thank you and escalator highway is getting a lot of attention you're the second person that loved it!
    Can you imagine no more having to walk?
    No need to really ride the bicycle but we can still use escalator with it!
    One day we'll all have our own little flying saucer!
    Doctor Ricky