One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from aryr
This was indeed a wonderful tercet, Gypsy. It definitely included the required criteria. I thought the picture was perfect for your words, A homeless man asleep on the ground with the walker not paying attention to him. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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This was indeed a wonderful tercet, Gypsy. It definitely included the required criteria. I thought the picture was perfect for your words, A homeless man asleep on the ground with the walker not paying attention to him. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words. Blessed be and hugs :)
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and yes, it's a sad thing in our society; some have become all about greed and none about compassion; I really think that greed is what gave rise to an abomination like Trump
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and yes, it's a sad thing in our society; some have become all about greed and none about compassion; I really think that greed is what gave rise to an abomination like Trump
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review. Hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from karenina
Awesome. Super double entendre in the final line.
Society does ice these films out.
Excellent tercet, Gypsy.
I wish we could all do more!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Awesome. Super double entendre in the final line.
Society does ice these films out.
Excellent tercet, Gypsy.
I wish we could all do more!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."Picasso
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Thank you for raising awareness!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation- reminds- how everyone loves a winner- because compassion is a dangerous endeavor- best left to the wise- with life experience/training- good poem and insight - broken spirits need helping hands-
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation- reminds- how everyone loves a winner- because compassion is a dangerous endeavor- best left to the wise- with life experience/training- good poem and insight - broken spirits need helping hands-
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy
I like calling you Gypsy Blue it has better way of saying just Gypsy
I havent see a tercet it seems ages ago.
It's so sad to see someone laing on the sidewal and no ones stops to see if the person is okay.
Geeting the cold shoulder is a great way of why I don't care.
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Gypsy
I like calling you Gypsy Blue it has better way of saying just Gypsy
I havent see a tercet it seems ages ago.
It's so sad to see someone laing on the sidewal and no ones stops to see if the person is okay.
Geeting the cold shoulder is a great way of why I don't care.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Same to you Gypsy Blue
Have a pleasant weekend
Gert
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You are welcome Gypsy Blue
The same to you have a plwasnt weekend
Gert
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, it's sad when the plight of the homeless is completely neglected. In Seattle and Portland, however, some of those homeless are really aggressive and shoot guns!
I agree the dignity of each person should be preserved despite their circumstances.
Suggestion: passers by => passersby
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Yes, it's sad when the plight of the homeless is completely neglected. In Seattle and Portland, however, some of those homeless are really aggressive and shoot guns!
I agree the dignity of each person should be preserved despite their circumstances.
Suggestion: passers by => passersby
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend. I fixed the error, thank you ♡
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Gypsy... great job on this short tercet. You hit all the parts with this well-written verse. The last line is a wonderful 'aha' moment and sums up the entire scene. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Hi Gypsy... great job on this short tercet. You hit all the parts with this well-written verse. The last line is a wonderful 'aha' moment and sums up the entire scene. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis