One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful and tragic picture you have painted with your few words. I can't imagine the pain that must have gone into these wishes. Thank you for sharing your great poem here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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This was a beautiful and tragic picture you have painted with your few words. I can't imagine the pain that must have gone into these wishes. Thank you for sharing your great poem here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your insightful and kind review, especially coming from you.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, meaningful, clear and creative. What
a beautiful thought to have a wishing fountain at the Cancer Center. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Great Poem, Gypsy!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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The author's words are heartfelt, meaningful, clear and creative. What
a beautiful thought to have a wishing fountain at the Cancer Center. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Great Poem, Gypsy!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review. Hugs.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from C.A.Currie
So few words are used to express so much pain. I wouldn't be surprised to know that it is the same all around he world. Very well done!
Hugs and sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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So few words are used to express so much pain. I wouldn't be surprised to know that it is the same all around he world. Very well done!
Hugs and sunshine from my heart to yours
~ Christine ~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."Picasso
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Prayers, money of various denominations, hope--we offer them all because of the killer named cancer. You chose a meaningful, touching setting for this expressive, timely poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Prayers, money of various denominations, hope--we offer them all because of the killer named cancer. You chose a meaningful, touching setting for this expressive, timely poem.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."Picasso
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This would be a great way to raise extra money for cancer victims. Hopefully, no one would steal the money. I enjoyed reading your great post. It is a great idea. This should be done at all hospitals, clinics, etc.
This is an excellent idea. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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This would be a great way to raise extra money for cancer victims. Hopefully, no one would steal the money. I enjoyed reading your great post. It is a great idea. This should be done at all hospitals, clinics, etc.
This is an excellent idea. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist."Picasso
Comment from dragonpoet
Gypsy,
This is a good mix of words and artwork. It shows how many wishes for cures that are made. And that is just a small percentage porbably, I hope that money all goes to research and treatment.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Gypsy,
This is a good mix of words and artwork. It shows how many wishes for cures that are made. And that is just a small percentage porbably, I hope that money all goes to research and treatment.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy ♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Don?t mention it, Gypsy. You too.
Joan
Comment from juliaSjames
Hello Gypsy
This haiku could also be a senryu I suppose. In either case it's written with a master's touch. Medical science is necessary for treating dis-ease but a little bit of luck doesn't hurt.
Always a pleasure and privilege to review your exceptional work my friend.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Hello Gypsy
This haiku could also be a senryu I suppose. In either case it's written with a master's touch. Medical science is necessary for treating dis-ease but a little bit of luck doesn't hurt.
Always a pleasure and privilege to review your exceptional work my friend.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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You are right, it's a senryu, I am so used to haiku sometimes I forget.
Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy
my what 4/6/3 haiku
The Wishing Fountain
I pray its fountain of coins will be used to fight violence (guns)
You always have a format that draws me in to read
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Gypsy
my what 4/6/3 haiku
The Wishing Fountain
I pray its fountain of coins will be used to fight violence (guns)
You always have a format that draws me in to read
Gert
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from aryr
Definitely a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. What a wonderful picture, that definitely is a lot of coinage. Your words showed the power of that coinage and the power of love and faith. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Definitely a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. What a wonderful picture, that definitely is a lot of coinage. Your words showed the power of that coinage and the power of love and faith. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend. Blessed be.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Let's hope that the coins in the fountain will help cancer victims in the future. Very nice idea you have penned! I wish the same for Covid sufferers.
Mark
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Gypsy,
Let's hope that the coins in the fountain will help cancer victims in the future. Very nice idea you have penned! I wish the same for Covid sufferers.
Mark
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy ♡
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis