The Amazing Heist
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "A Surprise"A team of six plan their final heist.
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a lovely baby shower: There was a lot of creativity going around.
There was even a cake made out to Paul and Belinda and Baby. Someone had good foresight or was an inner dowser & didn't realize it: "All of the gifts were a total blessing, especially the stroller built for two, they couldn't have planned it better."
No they've got to get back to work. Have you done any thinking of where it is going?
I like to be ahead by about 2 from the one I post. But then the promised reviews pile up. I have come down from 33 to 25. lol
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely baby shower: There was a lot of creativity going around.
There was even a cake made out to Paul and Belinda and Baby. Someone had good foresight or was an inner dowser & didn't realize it: "All of the gifts were a total blessing, especially the stroller built for two, they couldn't have planned it better."
No they've got to get back to work. Have you done any thinking of where it is going?
I like to be ahead by about 2 from the one I post. But then the promised reviews pile up. I have come down from 33 to 25. lol
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Liz for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It sounds like they depended on others for everything. They get what they want. It sounds like they don't have to work with everyone giving them what they need. I know some people like them. I've fallen into this kind of situation. I liked reading your post. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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It sounds like they depended on others for everything. They get what they want. It sounds like they don't have to work with everyone giving them what they need. I know some people like them. I've fallen into this kind of situation. I liked reading your post. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Carolyn for reviewing and your fantastic comments. You as well have a great weekend.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A break from the plan here as these characters can relax and enjoy a the baby shower and delight in all the gifts, much enjoyed, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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A break from the plan here as these characters can relax and enjoy a the baby shower and delight in all the gifts, much enjoyed, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much my friend for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from Aussie
Excellent and a calming chapter in your Amazing Heist. I haven't caught up with all of your chapters. I liked this soothing and happy day for the twins to come. Please write about Wiccan or your Native American beginnings? K xx
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Excellent and a calming chapter in your Amazing Heist. I haven't caught up with all of your chapters. I liked this soothing and happy day for the twins to come. Please write about Wiccan or your Native American beginnings? K xx
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Kay for reading, reviewing and your absolutely great comments. I will in a couple of weeks.
Comment from Pantygynt
We are definitely i to sub-plot country here. Evverything stops for the baby shower. I dont believe that they will ever actually get around to this heist. Lol.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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We are definitely i to sub-plot country here. Evverything stops for the baby shower. I dont believe that they will ever actually get around to this heist. Lol.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pantygynt for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I promise to get back to the heist in the next chapter.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your Amazing Heist chapter about Paul and Belinda's baby shower. The story moved along nicely and the plot was easy to understand. The characters are sweet and caring. I always thought double-seater strollers are a great idea.
Well done, my friend. Blessed be.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed reading your Amazing Heist chapter about Paul and Belinda's baby shower. The story moved along nicely and the plot was easy to understand. The characters are sweet and caring. I always thought double-seater strollers are a great idea.
Well done, my friend. Blessed be.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy for reviewing and your fantastic comments. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from royowen
There's something about the birth of a baby that brings out the better side of people, and the thought of those prams that contain two similar passengers is not only brilliant, but a package containing double joy, beautifully written Alie , just love the tone of this. Well done,,blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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There's something about the birth of a baby that brings out the better side of people, and the thought of those prams that contain two similar passengers is not only brilliant, but a package containing double joy, beautifully written Alie , just love the tone of this. Well done,,blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Roy for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. Yes, a baby does bring out the better side of people. Blessings.
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Thanks Alie, my pleasure
Comment from Fleedleflump
This was an interesting chapter with a pleasant flow to the prose. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Spag notes:
'they were all able to remember they're humble beginning.' - think this should be 'their'
'All of the gifts were a total blessing.
Especially the stroller built for two,' - These would feel better as one sentence: 'All of the gifts were a total blessing, especially the stroller built for two,'
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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This was an interesting chapter with a pleasant flow to the prose. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Spag notes:
'they were all able to remember they're humble beginning.' - think this should be 'their'
'All of the gifts were a total blessing.
Especially the stroller built for two,' - These would feel better as one sentence: 'All of the gifts were a total blessing, especially the stroller built for two,'
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Mike for reading, reviewing and you great comments. I will fix those in a moment.
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! And someone in that party had some inner insight to be able to sense the need for a double-seater stroller! These characters are so sweet and caring for one another. Love the sense of fellowship and support.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Hooray! And someone in that party had some inner insight to be able to sense the need for a double-seater stroller! These characters are so sweet and caring for one another. Love the sense of fellowship and support.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Wow, thank you so much Helene for reading, reviewing and you amazing comments. Just gotta love the fellowship and support. Blessings, smiles n hugs! 💝
