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Innocence Lost

In memory of children killed at school

2 total reviews 
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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You have written a great story. Using those words told a horror story. One real and sad. Many peoples lives were shattered. Innocent children are dead shot by a teenager. One who shot his own grandma. Thank you for
sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2022

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
    Thank you.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 01-Jun-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is well done, and you used all the prompts for a good contest entry. Thank you for sharing this. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 31-May-2022

reply by the author on 31-May-2022
    Thank you.