Worth Living
A short poem.4 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the Senryu Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
Good luck in the contest!
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thank you! I hope that I win.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Good poem and very relatable. I am sorry I read the statement in the box and not your poem on the green background. You are absolutely correct. Your syllable count is on point. I apologize for not scrolling down to see your original work. Perhaps it would be better to use a visual rather than someone's writing for you graphic. To be fair I rescored it too.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Good poem and very relatable. I am sorry I read the statement in the box and not your poem on the green background. You are absolutely correct. Your syllable count is on point. I apologize for not scrolling down to see your original work. Perhaps it would be better to use a visual rather than someone's writing for you graphic. To be fair I rescored it too.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you! The syllable count is correct.
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Okay!
Comment from Bridge
A lovely poem with a beautiful message. It is a message that we forget most of the time as we deal with the everyday challenges. We should try and remember this message.
All the best to you in the contest
With regards
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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A lovely poem with a beautiful message. It is a message that we forget most of the time as we deal with the everyday challenges. We should try and remember this message.
All the best to you in the contest
With regards
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You are not kidding. I just turned 69 May 20, and I can not believe how fast time has flown by me. Those years fly by before you know. And yes, life is worth living. Even though we never know what we will face. Thank you for the awareness.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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You are not kidding. I just turned 69 May 20, and I can not believe how fast time has flown by me. Those years fly by before you know. And yes, life is worth living. Even though we never know what we will face. Thank you for the awareness.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you and you're welcome!
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You are welcome.
