One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
I like the ice crystal ray. And you use a powerful verb like "spear" which shows us the power of nature and weather and how it can pierce the quiet comfort of human constructions like cabins.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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I like the ice crystal ray. And you use a powerful verb like "spear" which shows us the power of nature and weather and how it can pierce the quiet comfort of human constructions like cabins.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, although I don't like the way it condones violence. Those ice crystal rays need help, spearing the trusting cozy cabin---or maybe over thinking again?
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, although I don't like the way it condones violence. Those ice crystal rays need help, spearing the trusting cozy cabin---or maybe over thinking again?
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your continues support and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful day. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I like the way you have zoomed in during this poem, with stanza one being devoted to the landscape while stanza two is just outside the window. You meanwhile are tucked up in the warm, presumably writing. Kate xx
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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I like the way you have zoomed in during this poem, with stanza one being devoted to the landscape while stanza two is just outside the window. You meanwhile are tucked up in the warm, presumably writing. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your continues support and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful day. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from karenina
Great imagery! Unique and original wordplay here and such a stunning image to accompany this beautiful septolet. "spear cozy cabin" ~ wow.
That's one of those many "wish I'd thought of it" phrases! Your muse works overtime!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Great imagery! Unique and original wordplay here and such a stunning image to accompany this beautiful septolet. "spear cozy cabin" ~ wow.
That's one of those many "wish I'd thought of it" phrases! Your muse works overtime!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you very much, karenina. Hehehe...yes, my muse works overtime for slave wages. Not! I'm very appreciative of her and i hope she never leaves me. I appreciate your continues support and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful day. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Well, if ever you need a vacation, I'd be HAPPY to have her come stay with me for a week or three!
Comment from aryr
I loved the picture of the snow covered trees, Gypsy. Your words showed that the contrast between the trees and the cabin. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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I loved the picture of the snow covered trees, Gypsy. Your words showed that the contrast between the trees and the cabin. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate your continues support and insightful feedback. Have a wonderful day. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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You as well, have a wonderful day. You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation- pretty picture- ice crystal ray spears- sun light shine through ice into cabin?- trying to visualize- good flow-
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation- pretty picture- ice crystal ray spears- sun light shine through ice into cabin?- trying to visualize- good flow-
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and review.
Gypsy ♡
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy,
With your words I could image in my mind so cold and how windy it was and wwhat caused the whisting wind. Nice to have a cozy cabin .
Your Septolet poem remined me of Vermont.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Gypsy,
With your words I could image in my mind so cold and how windy it was and wwhat caused the whisting wind. Nice to have a cozy cabin .
Your Septolet poem remined me of Vermont.
Gert
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and review.
Gypsy ♡
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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You are most welcome Gypsy
Gert
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Gypsy You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from mermaids
Your vivid use of words makes nature come alive. It is as if winter is a live character and is able to pierce the cabin. You have a smooth flow of words and a clear picture is created in your poem.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Your vivid use of words makes nature come alive. It is as if winter is a live character and is able to pierce the cabin. You have a smooth flow of words and a clear picture is created in your poem.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words and insightful review.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." ― Pablo Picasso
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like coming into the warmth of a home. Or in this case, a nice war, cabin, with a roaring fire to warm not only the body. But the cokckles, beautifully written Gypsy. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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There's nothing like coming into the warmth of a home. Or in this case, a nice war, cabin, with a roaring fire to warm not only the body. But the cokckles, beautifully written Gypsy. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words and insightful review.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." ― Pablo Picasso
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Most welcome