A Tangled Web
A contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Tangled Web, has the required words and explains in terms of the retailer, the proper navigation and choice of set up for the success of bug catching in the spider's world. Fun to read.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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This poem, Tangled Web, has the required words and explains in terms of the retailer, the proper navigation and choice of set up for the success of bug catching in the spider's world. Fun to read.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Bill,
Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for the kind review!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very well done on this poem, using those words, and explaining the mystery of why the spider does not get caught in its own web. Amazing how our God created each species with what it need to procure food and protect itself.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Very well done on this poem, using those words, and explaining the mystery of why the spider does not get caught in its own web. Amazing how our God created each species with what it need to procure food and protect itself.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Anne,
Thank you for the generous review. Apparently not every one enjoyed it as much as you did. It?s not faring very well in the contest. But?as I have learned on this site?that too is a numbers game!
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You are welcome. We take a chance on these contests, as it all hinges on who votes for each entry. But it is fun to enter and we learn from each one.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very written poem using the required words for the writing prompt. You used the words in very good descriptive words about the spiders web. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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This is a very written poem using the required words for the writing prompt. You used the words in very good descriptive words about the spiders web. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
How many times when we clean our basement we find a cob web that has been created. I usually vacuum the web or take a sweep of a broom and remove it. I guess we do destroy the work the spider has created but I would not leave it hanging either.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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How many times when we clean our basement we find a cob web that has been created. I usually vacuum the web or take a sweep of a broom and remove it. I guess we do destroy the work the spider has created but I would not leave it hanging either.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Fantastic. Enlightening. Clear as a cloudless Spring Day. You had a way with words joining inquiries. I often do the same with as simple an idea as a word, dream or daytime reverie that leads to Wiki and finding what is needed to say. Congrats. six stars on the way.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Fantastic. Enlightening. Clear as a cloudless Spring Day. You had a way with words joining inquiries. I often do the same with as simple an idea as a word, dream or daytime reverie that leads to Wiki and finding what is needed to say. Congrats. six stars on the way.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Tom,
Thanks so much for the generous review. Apparently not everyone felt as strongly as you did. It?s not faring well in the contest voting so far. But..those too I have learned are a numbers game! I enjoy the wiki rabbitholes way more than the ribbons!
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There is a niche within the compound that befriended each other over time and I feel as you, I think, the vote is skewed with them towards each other. It's not that they are not deserving but they are not superior to many compositions contested against them
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A coven!
:)
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very clever development of your poem with information about the ways of the spider and how she does her work so skilfully. Nature is amazing. Well written. Best wishes for your contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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This is a very clever development of your poem with information about the ways of the spider and how she does her work so skilfully. Nature is amazing. Well written. Best wishes for your contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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Wendy,
Thanks so much for the kind review. Apparently not everyone felt as strongly as you did. It?s not faring well in the contest voting so far. But..those too I have learned are a numbers game!
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I think sometimes the voters go for rhyme above free verse in these unspecified ones. I liked yours.
But, you are right too. It can often be a numbers game. Don?t give up though.
Wendy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A Tangled Web ' , is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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'A Tangled Web ' , is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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duchess,
Thanks so much for the kind review. Apparently not everyone felt as strongly as you did. It?s not faring well in the contest voting so far. But..those too I have learned are a numbers game!
C2 , you've done you're best. That's an accomplishment in itself.
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A coven!
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Well some how autocorrect made amen a coven.
Thanks for letting me know.
:))))
Comment from leather
You have my last allotted six-star rating. I have read several of these entries and this is so far the easiest to read. To top it off, the poem gives a lot of interesting facts. Very well done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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You have my last allotted six-star rating. I have read several of these entries and this is so far the easiest to read. To top it off, the poem gives a lot of interesting facts. Very well done.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
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leather,
Thanks so much for the generous review. Apparently not everyone felt as strongly as you did. It?s not faring well in the contest voting so far. But..those too I think must be a numbers game!
Comment from Raul1
I like the last line stated of the numbers game. It is interesting and entertaining to read. The sentences flow with clarity. I like it. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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I like the last line stated of the numbers game. It is interesting and entertaining to read. The sentences flow with clarity. I like it. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for your kind review!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
Oh, wow, you did a wonderful job with this writing challenge. I was engrossed in your poem and learned something about spiders and their webs that I, honestly, never gave any thought to. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Oh, wow, you did a wonderful job with this writing challenge. I was engrossed in your poem and learned something about spiders and their webs that I, honestly, never gave any thought to. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for your kind review!
