Chains of Unforgiveness
Praising Jesus for His Forgiveness43 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you so much Raul. Your kind review and comments mean a lot to me.
Comment from Lobber
Hi my friend,
You have a poem full of wisdom about the power of forgiveness, for as you point out, it
)Unlocks the chains of bondage of emotional resent(
since unforgiveness can lead to
)bitterness that can eat at your soul(
with
)Thoughts of negativity(
Nice job.
- Lobber
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Hi my friend,
You have a poem full of wisdom about the power of forgiveness, for as you point out, it
)Unlocks the chains of bondage of emotional resent(
since unforgiveness can lead to
)bitterness that can eat at your soul(
with
)Thoughts of negativity(
Nice job.
- Lobber
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Lobber, you are awesome and I truly appreciate your very kind words and review. But giving me those extra and generous six stars means more than you could possibly know. Thank you so much my friend!!!
Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice poem on forgiveness. You have shown your struggle as you have gone through life. Very nice ending with a quote from the Lord. Very effective picture.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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A nice poem on forgiveness. You have shown your struggle as you have gone through life. Very nice ending with a quote from the Lord. Very effective picture.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you Paul for the awesome review and very kind words. This was truly a personal struggle that I never before faced. Your encouraging words are very helpful.
Comment from belinda45
I love the message in this poem. Forgiveness is exactly why He came. I have struggled mightily with in forgiveness. I'm sure many have. I love your rhyming couplets. Very well done. "Unwraps the chains of bondage of emotional resent" seems a bit awkward. Not sure that wasn't a typo. Great job!
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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I love the message in this poem. Forgiveness is exactly why He came. I have struggled mightily with in forgiveness. I'm sure many have. I love your rhyming couplets. Very well done. "Unwraps the chains of bondage of emotional resent" seems a bit awkward. Not sure that wasn't a typo. Great job!
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you so much Belinda. And first I have to tell you what a beautiful baby you have! Children are my weakness as I live for my grandkids. Thank you for your feedback on that one line. Actually, I'm not even sure why I chose the word unwraps. The more I look at it, it doesn't seem right to me either.
Do you think the word breaks would sound better? Or do you have one that you think works there even better? I truly appreciate you catching that as it really doesn't make any sense! But also thank. You for your very lovely review and comments my friend.
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I just went into change it, still wondering why I'd use that word, but it doesn't say unwraps, it says unlocks. Or was there a different part of that line that felt awkward? I truly do appreciate it.
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No. My mistake. It was unlocks. It was the end of the line. Seems chopped off or like the rhyme is forced.
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The other message would have helped me make a better comment. I read the other first. Lol. So sorry. I really like the word ?unlocks? as it was the couplet at the end of the line that was problematic I think. Hope this helps.
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Ok, I will check that out. Sometimes it's the rhythm but I will change if I see that if feels forced. Thank you so much for your thoughtful suggestions
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, clear, honest, and creative. I found
these words thought provoking and admire how the author conveys
the need for prayer and guidance. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork goes so well with the theme and words of this poem.
May God grant you peace.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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The author's words are heartfelt, clear, honest, and creative. I found
these words thought provoking and admire how the author conveys
the need for prayer and guidance. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork goes so well with the theme and words of this poem.
May God grant you peace.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks Harmony, this was like a personal conference of the devil on one shoulder arguing with the Angel on the other. However knowing that there is only one truth, is why I'm working towards making that the winning side. Thanks again my friend for the very kind review and words!
Comment from C T Curtis
"Chains of Unforgiveness" is a beautiful, well-written poem. It includes the emotional negatives but embraces the positive. The poem also shows how we always turn to Jesus when we need help in moving. The chosen picture is perfect for the poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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"Chains of Unforgiveness" is a beautiful, well-written poem. It includes the emotional negatives but embraces the positive. The poem also shows how we always turn to Jesus when we need help in moving. The chosen picture is perfect for the poem. Well done!
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Oh my goodness, you are a gem and an Angel! First of all, I just need to thank you for your most generous gift of the six stars, and such lovely words. Then I received notice that you also gave a member cent pump and bumped it up. Nobody has ever done that for me before so I thank you so very much!
You have put a big smile on my face as I realize what a wonderful person you must be. You helped me to also realize how there are still wonderful people in this world and why would I want to let a negative ordeal rule me when I am so blessed by people like you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart my friend!
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You are very welcome. May you always find some sort of good in every situation, even if it's just knowing God is getting you through and note the key word "through' - not stuck. Some events occur to help us realize even more fully how much we need God in our lives, and also that without the situation - we might not have come to that realization of needing Jesus every day. Blessings! Connie
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Once again I thank you!
Comment from mermaids
Forgiveness is an excellent theme for a poem, so many of us struggle with it. I like how you show the importance of forgiveness, it can enhance our lives. I like your two line verses with a smooth flow of rhyme that adds to the strength of your theme. Your words touch the reader.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Forgiveness is an excellent theme for a poem, so many of us struggle with it. I like how you show the importance of forgiveness, it can enhance our lives. I like your two line verses with a smooth flow of rhyme that adds to the strength of your theme. Your words touch the reader.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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l thank you so very much for your lovely review and comments. This was like a personal conference of the devil on one shoulder arguing with the Angel on the other. However knowing that there is only one truth, is why I'm working towards making that the winning side. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from amahra
This poem was a great eye-opener. Great job!
I know it is a gift, more for me than just for them
Unlocks the chains of bondage of emotional resent
Free of bitterness that can eat at your soul
Thoughts of negativity, replaced and makes you whole [I love these lines. They are the sole reason for us to forgive.]
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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This poem was a great eye-opener. Great job!
I know it is a gift, more for me than just for them
Unlocks the chains of bondage of emotional resent
Free of bitterness that can eat at your soul
Thoughts of negativity, replaced and makes you whole [I love these lines. They are the sole reason for us to forgive.]
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks so much Amahra, this was like a personal debate of the devil on one shoulder arguing with the Angel on the other. However knowing that there is only one truth, is why I'm working towards making that the winning side. Thanks again my friend for the very kind review and words!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nice poem on the importance of foregiveness for both parties in the dispute. It keeps them both humble and able to have a strong relationship. It is right to be thankful for the gift Jesus gave us for his sacrifice.
I think it would sound better if it read mental or visual.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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This is a nice poem on the importance of foregiveness for both parties in the dispute. It keeps them both humble and able to have a strong relationship. It is right to be thankful for the gift Jesus gave us for his sacrifice.
I think it would sound better if it read mental or visual.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you Joan for that tip, and I think l will go in and change it when I am done here. This isn't really a dispute, because I have never met the guy, nor do I want to. He hurt someone I love and therefor has become an issue for me. But as one other reviewer commented we can hate the sin, but try to forgive the sinner. And I am truly working on that one. Thanks my friend for your comforting words and kind review.
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No problem. I.
agree with the other reviewer, but can understand how hard it can be.
Joan
Comment from JoannaN
This is great. You poem is like an old-fashioned prayer (old-fashioned in a good sense), there is something magical, mystical in it. You're got my vote :) good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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This is great. You poem is like an old-fashioned prayer (old-fashioned in a good sense), there is something magical, mystical in it. You're got my vote :) good luck with the contest
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you so very much for your most gracious and generous six stars and review. I love how you characterized it as sounding like an old fashioned poem that seemed magical and mystical. That is just so beautiful sounding, so thank you Joanna. You are so very kind and I truly thank you for such a lovely review and those beautiful six stars!!!!
