Beyond The Glen
A little bit of fantasy7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You used all the words and created a delightful picture of the start of the day with a bit of magic that brushed the night "beyond the glen." Congratulations on your second place win!!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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You used all the words and created a delightful picture of the start of the day with a bit of magic that brushed the night "beyond the glen." Congratulations on your second place win!!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much. Love the flowers!
Comment from Wendy G
You have used the required words smoothly in a poem which makes sense and is not forced around the words. Rhyme and metre are smooth. Well done. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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You have used the required words smoothly in a poem which makes sense and is not forced around the words. Rhyme and metre are smooth. Well done. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I really like writing around fantasy so this was a pleasure. Thanks again.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You used those words well. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is lovely, it fits perfectly. You have a great story in a poem. That spider has much freedom, running loose and hard to spot usually until it is too late.
Danger lurks all over. Thank you for the awareness.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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You used those words well. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is lovely, it fits perfectly. You have a great story in a poem. That spider has much freedom, running loose and hard to spot usually until it is too late.
Danger lurks all over. Thank you for the awareness.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I get much enjoyment out of writing fantasy poetry. This one was kind of in-between but had a tweak of it anyway.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
Your poem was sweet, and you used the required words wisely. I could envision the place where faeries play. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Your poem was sweet, and you used the required words wisely. I could envision the place where faeries play. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I get much enjoyment out of writing fantasy poetry. This one was kind of in-between but had a tweak of it anyway.
Comment from Pantygynt
I love the way the fantasy world of the child is brought to a typically abrupt conclusion as the mothers instruction intrudes roughly into the child's world of make believe. It takes me back to my childhood, and that is a long, long time ago.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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I love the way the fantasy world of the child is brought to a typically abrupt conclusion as the mothers instruction intrudes roughly into the child's world of make believe. It takes me back to my childhood, and that is a long, long time ago.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I get much enjoyment out of writing fantasy poetry. This one was kind of in-between but had a tweak of it anyway.
Comment from oliver818
I like the summery images you invoke here and the use of the various words is very well done, especially the inclusion the word spider which would have been challenging for me. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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I like the summery images you invoke here and the use of the various words is very well done, especially the inclusion the word spider which would have been challenging for me. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I get much enjoyment out of writing fantasy poetry. This one was kind of in-between but had a tweak of it anyway.
Comment from LisaMay
Those mothers and children are up early! This is a sweet poem of morning fun. It feels magical with the mention of fairies, and I especially like that you have not demonised the spider as an evil or dangerous presence.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Those mothers and children are up early! This is a sweet poem of morning fun. It feels magical with the mention of fairies, and I especially like that you have not demonised the spider as an evil or dangerous presence.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your kind review. I get much enjoyment out of writing fantasy poetry. This one was kind of in-between but had a tweak of it anyway.
