Ocean Treasures
Alliteration poem contest6 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. All the pleasures of the beach are present and you have met the requirements of both alliteration and rhyme in a smooth and pleasing way. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Well done. All the pleasures of the beach are present and you have met the requirements of both alliteration and rhyme in a smooth and pleasing way. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very well done, and that is what the beach is for... relaxing. Good luck. Another one that gives me a hint what it is the originator sought. .................
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Very well done, and that is what the beach is for... relaxing. Good luck. Another one that gives me a hint what it is the originator sought. .................
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Comment from oliver818
You included a lot of great alliteration here, well done. I like the repeated use of the s too, it's effective and reminds us of the sound of the sea. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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You included a lot of great alliteration here, well done. I like the repeated use of the s too, it's effective and reminds us of the sound of the sea. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 29-May-2022
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Comment from LisaMay
It's winter here at the moment so your summery poem was invitingly warm. Walking along a beach enjoying swimming and finding shells are lovely activities. You handled the alliteration and syllable challenge well.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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It's winter here at the moment so your summery poem was invitingly warm. Walking along a beach enjoying swimming and finding shells are lovely activities. You handled the alliteration and syllable challenge well.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hello Mystery Writer! This is such a great poem for the contest! You did such a wonderful job, I felt almost like going to the beach! The rhymes were spot on as your syllable count and lines were superb. (Don't you hate when reviewers tell you what you already knew? Duh! Anyway great job and great poem!
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Hello Mystery Writer! This is such a great poem for the contest! You did such a wonderful job, I felt almost like going to the beach! The rhymes were spot on as your syllable count and lines were superb. (Don't you hate when reviewers tell you what you already knew? Duh! Anyway great job and great poem!
Comment Written 28-May-2022
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Comment from lancellot
So far this is the best I've seen. You alliterations are clear and easy to rad within the context of the poem. The rhyme scheme is exactly as should be and the overall poem has a positive nature theme, that many on the site adore. Great idea and execution.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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So far this is the best I've seen. You alliterations are clear and easy to rad within the context of the poem. The rhyme scheme is exactly as should be and the overall poem has a positive nature theme, that many on the site adore. Great idea and execution.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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