Comment from Sarah Tummey

Needs Improvement

You've got the alliteration, but I think the rhyme scheme needs work. The first 2 lines are supposed to rhyme with the last. You've got forgiving, giving; you could have living at the end? Also, lines 5 and 6 are supposed to rhyme with one another, and I'm not really sure if the poem actually makes sense. What is it you're trying to say?

 Comment Written 28-May-2022

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reply by the author on 28-May-2022

Thank you, but I disagree with you!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

It looks like you followed the prompt perfectly. Prayer is very personal, and it can be different things for different people. Thanks for sharing this here. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-May-2022

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reply by the author on 28-May-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem has a good message but only complies with half of the challenge. There is an alliteration per line requirement as well.

Some folks are so forgiving;
it is go-time of giving.
Preach to persons who need help;
they will not wail, cry, or yelp.
Realize the right you've preached,
pray the plan you had mastered,
it's what you will leave learning.

 Comment Written 28-May-2022

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reply by the author on 28-May-2022

Thank you for your help! I have fixed the mistakes. Is it now good enough for a five stars rating? Please check.