One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your haiku is skillfully-composed, according to the rules for haiku, and vividly descriptive, creating an appealing scenario in nature by including both flora and fauna of the area.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Your haiku is skillfully-composed, according to the rules for haiku, and vividly descriptive, creating an appealing scenario in nature by including both flora and fauna of the area.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words and insightful review.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." ― Pablo Picasso
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so descriptive with cleve metaphors to make this an exceptional write and well worth six stars, one of the best Haiku I have ever read, so magical and skilfull, love Dolly x
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This is so descriptive with cleve metaphors to make this an exceptional write and well worth six stars, one of the best Haiku I have ever read, so magical and skilfull, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I appreciate your exceptional review, six stars, and insightful feedback.
Gypsy
"Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist." ― Pablo Picasso
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You are most welcome, well deserved x x x
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Rows of Golden Wheat', is an extremely well-written piece. Penned through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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'Rows of Golden Wheat', is an extremely well-written piece. Penned through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
Gypsy, as always you're more than welcome.
the Duchess
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. You do indeed paint a picture with your words. I really enjoyed the two pictures. I loved how your words do paint a picture. The words create so much more. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. You do indeed paint a picture with your words. I really enjoyed the two pictures. I loved how your words do paint a picture. The words create so much more. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I really appreciate that you took the time to read all my poems. Blessed be, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." ? Novalis
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
This is a marvelous haiku in the traditional 5-7-5 form.
with excellent concrete imagery and solid connection
leading to the reflective satori line.
I enjoyed the weaving reference with sewn, quilt, tailorbirds and threads.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Hello Gypsy,
This is a marvelous haiku in the traditional 5-7-5 form.
with excellent concrete imagery and solid connection
leading to the reflective satori line.
I enjoyed the weaving reference with sewn, quilt, tailorbirds and threads.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Robert. As always, I appreciate your time and kindness. Thank you for the exceptional review and six stars!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from Fei Ma
Beautiful words for beautiful pictures. Very creative and abstract.
Another nice Haiku. This author is one of my favorite writers when it comes to Haiku. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Beautiful words for beautiful pictures. Very creative and abstract.
Another nice Haiku. This author is one of my favorite writers when it comes to Haiku. Nice job.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Fei Ma. Thank you for your valuable time, the exceptional review and six stars.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." ? Novalis
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I do like the overall idea for this Haiku post. Your imagery in verse and illustration is spot on. Of course, I favor your alliterations in your last line! Patch quilt hills is a delicious description/image.
Mark
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Gypsy,
I do like the overall idea for this Haiku post. Your imagery in verse and illustration is spot on. Of course, I favor your alliterations in your last line! Patch quilt hills is a delicious description/image.
Mark
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Mark. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your valuable time to review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." ? Novalis
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I believe that you have painted a picture with words. Very stunning images in words and beautifully presented. As my first read of today, it was a great way to start my day.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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I believe that you have painted a picture with words. Very stunning images in words and beautifully presented. As my first read of today, it was a great way to start my day.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your valuable time to review my poem.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." ? Novalis
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I like the font colors showing the
progression in the poem.
-Effective imagery paints a good
word picture of the wheat and the hills.
-A good satori line completes the picture.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-I like the font colors showing the
progression in the poem.
-Effective imagery paints a good
word picture of the wheat and the hills.
-A good satori line completes the picture.
-Well done.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Pam. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your valuable time and exceptional review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." Novalis
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You are very welcome, Gypsy. Thanks for sharing the quotes.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this peaceful poem very much with its birds-eye view of a country landscape. I love the term "patch quilt hills. Very evokative. Thanks for showing us once again how a Haiku should be. Kate xx
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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I enjoyed this peaceful poem very much with its birds-eye view of a country landscape. I love the term "patch quilt hills. Very evokative. Thanks for showing us once again how a Haiku should be. Kate xx
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you, Kate :) I appreciate your lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus