George Floyd (1973-2020)
A new poetic form in honor of George Floyd (1973-2020)15 total reviews
Comment from Mark Childs
Strong message and I'm not trying to be a stickler but technically, the first line has six syllables. ev - er - y life mat-ters. Well done regardless and to some it's pronounced ev-ry so just my two cents.
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Strong message and I'm not trying to be a stickler but technically, the first line has six syllables. ev - er - y life mat-ters. Well done regardless and to some it's pronounced ev-ry so just my two cents.
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Comment Written 26-May-2022
Comment from leather
The format of this poem is far too complicated for me, but at the same time, it is unusual and unique. I shutter in disbelief at the image you provided. It is so powerful.
Best wishes.
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The format of this poem is far too complicated for me, but at the same time, it is unusual and unique. I shutter in disbelief at the image you provided. It is so powerful.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a very unique and provocation style of poetry.
I applaud your innovation.
The topic is relevant today, as racial injustice is the number one crisis in America, in my opinion. This is an important message you are sharing with of your readers.
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This is a very unique and provocation style of poetry.
I applaud your innovation.
The topic is relevant today, as racial injustice is the number one crisis in America, in my opinion. This is an important message you are sharing with of your readers.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
My heart skipped a beat, and my heart felt as if it fell. This is heartbreaking to the maximum. The police officer looks as if he is proud of himself. Holding a man down with his knee on his neck. Rest in Peace George Floyd. Seeing this picture up this close brought back horrific memories from two-years ago.
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My heart skipped a beat, and my heart felt as if it fell. This is heartbreaking to the maximum. The police officer looks as if he is proud of himself. Holding a man down with his knee on his neck. Rest in Peace George Floyd. Seeing this picture up this close brought back horrific memories from two-years ago.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
5/26/22/---2:00pm.
Looks like everyone isrembering the hate shine in that day that should have never happened. Cop abuse just don't get itthese days to much going in, people gave simuch hate fit each other of both races.All lives natter young and old. Color udps just a word as we all bleed the same red.
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5/26/22/---2:00pm.
Looks like everyone isrembering the hate shine in that day that should have never happened. Cop abuse just don't get itthese days to much going in, people gave simuch hate fit each other of both races.All lives natter young and old. Color udps just a word as we all bleed the same red.
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Comment Written 26-May-2022
