"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the rapid fire approach you take to the lines here, firing thoughts off. The extreme rhyming works well and helps transition between the phases of the poem. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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I like the rapid fire approach you take to the lines here, firing thoughts off. The extreme rhyming works well and helps transition between the phases of the poem. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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While I was told many years ago on this site that I'm a Slam Poet.
But as my writings increased in and multiplied in all ways I have now written songs children's stories love poems fairy tales and novels.
Thanks for stopping by reviewing this and have a wonderful rest of your week!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again Ricky hope your day is going well. I really liked this one, it's a question I've asked many times so it was definitely relatable. nice job!
give and take
I love to give
giving is great
but when you're
doing all the giving
there's only so much
you can take
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Hello again Ricky hope your day is going well. I really liked this one, it's a question I've asked many times so it was definitely relatable. nice job!
give and take
I love to give
giving is great
but when you're
doing all the giving
there's only so much
you can take
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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About one out of every 250 I let my son do to writing!
Besides most of my inspirations coming from above!
Thanks for reviewing and stopping by and have a blessed week!
Doctor Ricky 1024