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Comment from Fei Ma
Another nice poem by the author. I like this one very much in both words and meaning of the words. Life is like sailing down a river to the ocean. Individual water drops evaporate to the air. Super sweet.
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Another nice poem by the author. I like this one very much in both words and meaning of the words. Life is like sailing down a river to the ocean. Individual water drops evaporate to the air. Super sweet.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's always good to hear from other poets/authors. I appreciate your valuable time, the exceptional review and six stars.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." ? Novalis
Comment from JoannaN
What I like about your poem is the way is sounds. It is similar to a stream of water that speeds up in certain moments to slow down in the end. "Drops await ascension" - this is a great summary, as it can be seen on multiple levels - with people as droplets of water awaiting their fate.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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What I like about your poem is the way is sounds. It is similar to a stream of water that speeds up in certain moments to slow down in the end. "Drops await ascension" - this is a great summary, as it can be seen on multiple levels - with people as droplets of water awaiting their fate.
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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Exactly :)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I very much enjoyed the linking of human life and aging to the onward rush of a fast-flowing stream. It reminds me of the adage "time waits for no man". I enjoyed this poem particularly for its imagery. Kate xx
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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I very much enjoyed the linking of human life and aging to the onward rush of a fast-flowing stream. It reminds me of the adage "time waits for no man". I enjoyed this poem particularly for its imagery. Kate xx
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation- modern Tanka interesting form- poem tells the story of the river cycle - reminds of hunting days - river rafting Oregon- poem flows well- comparing to life - finally ascending at journeys end - good job
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation- modern Tanka interesting form- poem tells the story of the river cycle - reminds of hunting days - river rafting Oregon- poem flows well- comparing to life - finally ascending at journeys end - good job
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from karenina
This one speaks to me! The years whirl by in a blur! Yesterday I was young! "Age" seems always to be a step ahead...
Ah, but I'm slower now, and tire easily.
I can't escape the rapids!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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This one speaks to me! The years whirl by in a blur! Yesterday I was young! "Age" seems always to be a step ahead...
Ah, but I'm slower now, and tire easily.
I can't escape the rapids!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, karenina. I appreciate you. Hugs!
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Hugs back with a smile!
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your modern tanka.
I like the simile here and I totally agree that every day seems to pass faster the the last.
Well written and presented.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your modern tanka.
I like the simile here and I totally agree that every day seems to pass faster the the last.
Well written and presented.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Hugs!
I couldn't resist that picture.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very well said and written using metaphors of how life passes us by so quickly and as we age, we do feel we are on rapids. However, like water flowing into the ocean, our journey hopefully ends in heaven.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Very well said and written using metaphors of how life passes us by so quickly and as we age, we do feel we are on rapids. However, like water flowing into the ocean, our journey hopefully ends in heaven.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Hugs!
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Gloria ....
Fine use of metaphor here, to explain the passage of life, like the river, the will evaporate and return to water to fall again, as a literal explanation, or also as the ascension into heaven.
Very well done, Gypsy. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Fine use of metaphor here, to explain the passage of life, like the river, the will evaporate and return to water to fall again, as a literal explanation, or also as the ascension into heaven.
Very well done, Gypsy. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Gloria. It's so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and six stars. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This poem is beautifully expressed, painting a visual picture in the mind of passing time and what lies ahead in life. Or perhaps, after life.
Well done.
Have a beautiful day
Eria
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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This poem is beautifully expressed, painting a visual picture in the mind of passing time and what lies ahead in life. Or perhaps, after life.
Well done.
Have a beautiful day
Eria
Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much. It's so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from moongirlwriter
I always find your writing very interesting. I have never quite looked at water as in relationship with Christ. . .but okay. It works. your words flow nicely and just like the water take on a life of their own. Best of luck with this writing. Great artwork too.
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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I always find your writing very interesting. I have never quite looked at water as in relationship with Christ. . .but okay. It works. your words flow nicely and just like the water take on a life of their own. Best of luck with this writing. Great artwork too.
Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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It doesn't have to be religious but in Spain the word,ascension, is related to Jesus christ.
Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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:)
