Reviews from

Bayou Teacher

old school--beloved spinster

4 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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"Child, this black skirt picks up everything but men and money" That's funny. Life is meant to be enjoyed, and it seems she did it well with a firm hand used as needed.

 Comment Written 25-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Leonie was a memorable character.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Leonie was a memorable character.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Leonie was a memorable character.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 26-May-2022
    ;-)
Comment from Lisa Tepp
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Wonderful job painting this captivating portrait of Leonie! You gave some details that described her and her surroundings beautifully. She definitely was memorable!

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Yes, after 65 years, I still remember her clearly!
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Yes, after 65 years, I still remember her clearly!
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. Yes, after 65 years, I still remember her clearly!
Comment from Terry Broxson
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This is a great story, I love it for this contest, good luck. I also love the phrase...eighteen miles down the four-mile bayou. A very well-written memoir. Outstanding work! Terry.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. I live in south Louisiana, not far from Four MIle Bayou. And it was about 18 miles down that bayou!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. I live in south Louisiana, not far from Four MIle Bayou. And it was about 18 miles down that bayou!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for responding. I live in south Louisiana, not far from Four MIle Bayou. And it was about 18 miles down that bayou!!
Comment from Pantygynt
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By the time you were in her class this teacher had had time to hone er technique to a fine cutting edge. You were lucky enough to experience her in her best years.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for reading and responding. Yes, I was lucky! And 65 years later, I remember her clearly.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for reading and responding. Yes, I was lucky! And 65 years later, I remember her clearly.
reply by the author on 26-May-2022
    Thanks for reading and responding. Yes, I was lucky! And 65 years later, I remember her clearly.