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In Every Creature

Faith is trust and love and kindness

15 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Kace, I'm so sorry I'm late...

this is a beautiful faith poem sweetie pie...
it is perfectly true to word...you can say you
believe in God...but without faith and pray...
it's just words...

and the way to show God you have faith in Him...

follow His words to us...

it is truly greed and control that has take over
our world my sweet friend...but the world that was
once perfect...will one day be perfect again...
all in God's time...

I love your poem you...and soooooo love the picture...
elephants and polar bears are my two top favorite...
and I like penguins too...

very well written...love to you and Benny...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 31-May-2022


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
    Hello my friend. Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed. K xx
reply by l.raven on 02-Jun-2022
    your so very welcome sweetie pie...
    love xxoo
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I love the picture of the elephant family K and the comparison to mankind's greed against nature. A lovely faith poem K and I wish you well in the contest.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Thanks again for reading another of my poems. We are losing our Koala through disease. K xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a sweet picture of the little baby elephant
being protected by its mom. I loved your entry,
Aussie. Your lines read well with great imagery
and smooth flow. I like the way you contrasted
faith creatures in nature have as opposed to that
man has, or doesn't have. You made a valid point.
Your last verse is a great summation.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Hello my friend, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. PS have written to T will let you know. K xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Your key scriptural message is, "Without faith it is impossible to please God," and "Faith is the evidence of things not yet seen." You must believe in God's word and lean not on your own understanding. I wish you the best in the Faith poetry contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Indeed. I don't preach because some folks don't understand the Bible - just a hint now and then. Thanks for reading. K xx
Comment from country ranch writer
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5/24/22---4:22pm


Beautiful picture of elephants out in the wild. We must protect our animals in the wild. We must stop poaching that continues on and on.


 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Hi Barb. I haven't had time to edit your last write. Sorry, lots of grammar/spelling mistakes.
    When I have time I will re look. K xx
reply by country ranch writer on 25-May-2022
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Comment from country ranch writer
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5/24/22---4:22pm


Beautiful picture of elephants out in the wild. We must protect our animals in the wild. We must stop poaching that continues on and on.


 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Thanks so much my friend. K xx
reply by country ranch writer on 25-May-2022
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Comment from mermaids
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I like the image of the elephants in your words, so true. The elephants protect one another and have so much faith. God teaches us through the animals, we need to listen and learn. Excellent faith based poem that teaches the reader and is relevant to today's world.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Hello Elaine, Thanks so much for reading. Glad you liked. Your turn now. K xx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is an excellent poem in all respects. You have used powerful, vivid metaphors to capture the power of faith; you have also described the mindsets of those who lack faith.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Hello Janice, Thanks so much for reading and appreciating my faith. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the My Faith Poetry contest, Kay, I wish you well. I really enjoyed the picture because for something so large they can be rather gentle. I liked your words simply because it showed mankind as greedy and ruthless. It's time we thought of other critters.

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Hello my friend, Thanks so much for reading. Man has many lessons to learn. Our Koala are dying from another disease which could wipe them out. Our National animal. Love, K xx
reply by aryr on 25-May-2022
    Oh, I have never seen a Koala but I do adore them, I even have a cuddly Koala bear. You are right, man has many lessons to learn. You are most welcome, Kay.
Comment from Wendy G
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Wow that's very insightful. So right. Animals do not need to fear their own whereas that can't be said of humans - very sad. I like your clever interweaving of Bible verses, and I particularly like your concluding two lines. Well done and best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-May-2022


reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    G'Day down there. Thanks for reading, glad you liked my idea of faith. I only write when the spirit moves me. Blessings, Kay xx