Lightning
Lightning can be very frightening.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem has good imagery of the storm. It shows that beauty and fright can be mixed together. I love watching storms.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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This poem has good imagery of the storm. It shows that beauty and fright can be mixed together. I love watching storms.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 28-May-2022
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Thank you for the review. Storms have always intrigued me.
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Carma,
You?re welcome. I think this is true for a lot of us.
Joan
Comment from jessizero
Your ode to lightning is beautiful and terrifying, much like lightning itself. I like your rhymes as well. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem here, and keep up the good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Your ode to lightning is beautiful and terrifying, much like lightning itself. I like your rhymes as well. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem here, and keep up the good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from LisaMay
Dramatic weather can indeed be beautiful but terrifying. You have described the feeling very well in your poem.
Suggestion:
I find all those capital letters distracting. There's no need for them except the convention of starting each line with a capital letter.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Dramatic weather can indeed be beautiful but terrifying. You have described the feeling very well in your poem.
Suggestion:
I find all those capital letters distracting. There's no need for them except the convention of starting each line with a capital letter.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you for the review and feedback. I debated on all the caps, it would have looked and felt cleaner without so many.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, and I have noticed it is getting louder and closer every year that goes by. I am afraid of lightning. When it gets too close, I usually pray. I ask the Lord to make it go away. However, I ask him not to hurt others. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Yes, and I have noticed it is getting louder and closer every year that goes by. I am afraid of lightning. When it gets too close, I usually pray. I ask the Lord to make it go away. However, I ask him not to hurt others. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you for the review. I have always been fascinated with the weather.
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You are welcome.
