One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Poem- good Haiku form- good presentation- paints a clear picture of a star filed sky above a a single lonely aspen leaf in a tree - good job
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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I like your Poem- good Haiku form- good presentation- paints a clear picture of a star filed sky above a a single lonely aspen leaf in a tree - good job
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate you.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well 17 syllable haiku! You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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This is a very well 17 syllable haiku! You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from aryr
What a superb haiku, Gypsy. Your words definitely showed that the lone aspen leaf did wonders to your words. They resonated the fact that the skydome was indeed dripping with the stars. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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What a superb haiku, Gypsy. Your words definitely showed that the lone aspen leaf did wonders to your words. They resonated the fact that the skydome was indeed dripping with the stars. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs and blessings ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Most welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from karenina
So very effective. Your words, the images, the colors!
To visit your poetry is to give myself a gift!
I never leave unsated. You are a poetesss of substance!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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So very effective. Your words, the images, the colors!
To visit your poetry is to give myself a gift!
I never leave unsated. You are a poetesss of substance!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words, karenina. Hugs.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Smile...
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice poem stressing loneliness even in a full universe. And in truth we are all alone in some way. The presentation is wonderful, as your submissions are.
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In your comments the site injected some extended characters. I've gotten to editing for these constantly.
Thanks for a good read. Peace.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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A nice poem stressing loneliness even in a full universe. And in truth we are all alone in some way. The presentation is wonderful, as your submissions are.
Comment:
In your comments the site injected some extended characters. I've gotten to editing for these constantly.
Thanks for a good read. Peace.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That says a lot about the time of year, the brightness of the stars and the focus on the lone aspen leaf which is usually surrounded by many other leaves. That leads to the final line perfectly.
Beautiful presentation!!
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Wow! That says a lot about the time of year, the brightness of the stars and the focus on the lone aspen leaf which is usually surrounded by many other leaves. That leads to the final line perfectly.
Beautiful presentation!!
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Hugs.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus