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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Poem- good Haiku form- good presentation- paints a clear picture of a star filed sky above a a single lonely aspen leaf in a tree - good job

 Comment Written 24-May-2022

reply by the author on 25-May-2022
    Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate you.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well 17 syllable haiku! You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from aryr
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What a superb haiku, Gypsy. Your words definitely showed that the lone aspen leaf did wonders to your words. They resonated the fact that the skydome was indeed dripping with the stars. Blessed be n hugs.

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs and blessings ♡

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by aryr on 24-May-2022
    Most welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from karenina
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So very effective. Your words, the images, the colors!

To visit your poetry is to give myself a gift!

I never leave unsated. You are a poetesss of substance!

Karenina

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words, karenina. Hugs.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by karenina on 24-May-2022
    Smile...
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A nice poem stressing loneliness even in a full universe. And in truth we are all alone in some way. The presentation is wonderful, as your submissions are.

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In your comments the site injected some extended characters. I've gotten to editing for these constantly.

Thanks for a good read. Peace.

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by dellsworthpoet on 24-May-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! That says a lot about the time of year, the brightness of the stars and the focus on the lone aspen leaf which is usually surrounded by many other leaves. That leads to the final line perfectly.
Beautiful presentation!!

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words. Hugs.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus