Walk with Me
solitary walking18 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Oh my, I love the words of your poem but truly don't feel that the artwork represents it well. For me, the art doesn't represent a quiet walk or contentment. Your writing deserves so much more so my critique will be based only on the writing. Best of luck with this piece. :)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Oh my, I love the words of your poem but truly don't feel that the artwork represents it well. For me, the art doesn't represent a quiet walk or contentment. Your writing deserves so much more so my critique will be based only on the writing. Best of luck with this piece. :)
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks, moongirl, for your response. Your suggestion is a good one.
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:)
Comment from mermaids
AS a walker and a person who oftens walks alone, I enjoyed reading your words. There is a light feel and flow to your poem. Simple pleasures are the gold of life and I like your verse about finding peace in them. Excellent poem that is tranquil and encourages the reader to find peace.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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AS a walker and a person who oftens walks alone, I enjoyed reading your words. There is a light feel and flow to your poem. Simple pleasures are the gold of life and I like your verse about finding peace in them. Excellent poem that is tranquil and encourages the reader to find peace.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks for reading and responding.
Comment from Mark D. R.
This certainly deserved the accolades and honor you received for this contest. I too favor using FanArt for my posts.
You ably captured the essence of a solitary walk at the beach in your Septolet verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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This certainly deserved the accolades and honor you received for this contest. I too favor using FanArt for my posts.
You ably captured the essence of a solitary walk at the beach in your Septolet verse.
Mark
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Mark, for reading and responding.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Elaine.
-Congratulations on your win in the contest.
-You did a good job with the poem establishing
a positive mood in the opening verse.
-Very good examples follow the theme
in the second half.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Elaine.
-Congratulations on your win in the contest.
-You did a good job with the poem establishing
a positive mood in the opening verse.
-Very good examples follow the theme
in the second half.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading and responding.
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You are welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Walk with Me', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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' Walk with Me', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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I appreciate your comments. Thanks.
You're very welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on winning the contest with this peacefully calming offering in a very well constructed septolet. They are activities I enjoy doing myself when seeking contentment.
(I saw one reviewer gave you a 'needs improvement' rating. I think you could ask in what way your poem could be improved, as she seemed full of praise for it. Then she might realise her rating must have been an unintentional finger-slip.)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Congratulations on winning the contest with this peacefully calming offering in a very well constructed septolet. They are activities I enjoy doing myself when seeking contentment.
(I saw one reviewer gave you a 'needs improvement' rating. I think you could ask in what way your poem could be improved, as she seemed full of praise for it. Then she might realise her rating must have been an unintentional finger-slip.)
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much for the support!! I appreciate it.
Comment from harmony13
Beautiful poem! The author's words are engaging, comforting, peaceful,
descriptive and creative. I found these words related to where I find
peace. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments
this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Beautiful poem! The author's words are engaging, comforting, peaceful,
descriptive and creative. I found these words related to where I find
peace. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments
this poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Thanks for reading and responding.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Septolet Poem
Contest. Congratulations on being the Winner!
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the Septolet Poem
Contest. Congratulations on being the Winner!
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2022
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Hi Gypsy! Can you give me some specific feedback? I am always hoping to improve my work.
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I like it the way it is. You followed the rules well. My only suggestion is the connection between lines and the dashes.
Find peace
in the ordinary
life pleasures...
barefoot walks,
sunny morns,
solitude, and
contentment.
Comment from Whitewave
elainec4
Lovely thoughts and feelings expressed in your words and picture, reminding us that the simple things in life are best.
There is an abundance of treasures in life's simple pleasures.
Barefoot walks on the beach are a perfect way to sink into the peace and healing solitude of nature which we all yearn for.
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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elainec4
Lovely thoughts and feelings expressed in your words and picture, reminding us that the simple things in life are best.
There is an abundance of treasures in life's simple pleasures.
Barefoot walks on the beach are a perfect way to sink into the peace and healing solitude of nature which we all yearn for.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thanks for reading and responding--and agreeing with my philosophy!!!
Comment from royowen
Yep, it goes with the words of that great song, "the best things in life are free" I know that people living in peaceful surrounds are less likely to suffer blood pressure or anything like that, beautifully written my friendly blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Yep, it goes with the words of that great song, "the best things in life are free" I know that people living in peaceful surrounds are less likely to suffer blood pressure or anything like that, beautifully written my friendly blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thanks for reading and responding. I appreciate your thoughts--and I admire your work.
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Thank you
