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Can you hear hope calling?4 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Well done for getting this positive message into the 7 lines and 14 words. It can be easy to miss that call sometimes, but life's story isn't over yet.
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Well done for getting this positive message into the 7 lines and 14 words. It can be easy to miss that call sometimes, but life's story isn't over yet.
Comment Written 25-May-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Finally, another Septolet thank actually makes sense to me. Well done. Good luck. If read your piece stands a chance. .........................................................
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Finally, another Septolet thank actually makes sense to me. Well done. Good luck. If read your piece stands a chance. .........................................................
Comment Written 25-May-2022
Comment from Fairul Jamal
Hi, nicely written. I like how you frame the situation and underlying message. Had to drop a star as you had an extra one word from the form limit. All the best for the contest!
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Hi, nicely written. I like how you frame the situation and underlying message. Had to drop a star as you had an extra one word from the form limit. All the best for the contest!
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Fairul,
Thanks for your review. I appreciate your comments and note of the extra word. I've made the correction and re-posted the poem. Feel free to take a second look.
Eugene
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Hi, looks good. Have updated my rating. All the best!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
You select a great visual for your poem. I loved this short poem because it had a clear message, and it resonates with the present state of affairs in our world. Good luck in the competition.
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You select a great visual for your poem. I loved this short poem because it had a clear message, and it resonates with the present state of affairs in our world. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
