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Trav'lers Die? They Change Route

My story. Work took me all over the world. Next?

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Reese,
This fits the contest well and is a good one for all those who are constant travelers.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 22-May-2022


reply by the author on 22-May-2022
    My offering speaks truth: I have already outlined my epitaph for my daughters to go by. I sure do not want their opinion spoken out loud! We are still close enough that, even grown with children, they are eager to set me straight. Thanks for stopping by my place.
Comment from Susan Newell
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Nice to hear from you Reese. I hope this is fiction and you are still able to afford the gas for your extended RV tour and not sending this back from the great beyond via some charlatan medium! Funny, I thought this was a blind entry contest. Hmmmm. Sue

 Comment Written 22-May-2022


reply by the author on 22-May-2022
    Me thinks it is not ESP by which you know me. Indeed, most of my offerings just rearrange things you already know. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
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I read the poem few times thinking 'this author is writing his own epitaph.' I hadn't noticed that was the contest requirement.
It makes perfect sense now. Many travels through life with visits to many countries but none to compare with the final destination plans, through the Master's galaxy.

Warmly,

Juliette

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    When I was young, a very popular movie was "Let no man write my epitaph". One of those things that has stuck with me. I am 74 with a weaker heart and I have written my own for my family to read. So, this prompt was a natural! Of course, mine is much longer; I am a Texan. Our philosophy is "why use one word when twelve will do?" Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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He is on a journey of no return. He can fly all around the universe. Not worrying about a schedule. Not worrying about being late. No clocks to wind. This was a great story. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022


reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    And can you imagine the movies on those flights! How he made the earth and stars all of us and the variety of animals and plants. I want to watch them all! Thanks for stopping by and sharing.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 21-May-2022
    Yes. You are welcome.