Wrongly I Write
As Often As I Might5 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I enjoyed this poem of perseverance through self-doubt, which is something I'm sure most readers can relate to.
My only question is for this line:
"Never Ill willed wrongly I'll write"
With this particular font, it would be more easily read as
"Never ill-willed, wrongly I'll write"
with a lowercase i, comma, and a hyphen.
Cheers!
Erika
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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I enjoyed this poem of perseverance through self-doubt, which is something I'm sure most readers can relate to.
My only question is for this line:
"Never Ill willed wrongly I'll write"
With this particular font, it would be more easily read as
"Never ill-willed, wrongly I'll write"
with a lowercase i, comma, and a hyphen.
Cheers!
Erika
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like the theme of determination in this, of that dogged belief that keeps us going no matter what. If you're driven to write, then you will!
I saw a couple of things that might have been spags but, given the meaning of your poem, I'm assuming they were intended ironically.
Mike
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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I like the theme of determination in this, of that dogged belief that keeps us going no matter what. If you're driven to write, then you will!
I saw a couple of things that might have been spags but, given the meaning of your poem, I'm assuming they were intended ironically.
Mike
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
Comment from royowen
When I first started here I was terrified to post, there were so many talented writers, I wrote a poem called "Cringe" and that's what happened, I cringed, so well done with your poem in mono rhyme, and the same, one has to choose the "right" rhyme and you did. Well done, blessings Roy
Query : throwing a my left as I write. 2: still in its (site) sight?
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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When I first started here I was terrified to post, there were so many talented writers, I wrote a poem called "Cringe" and that's what happened, I cringed, so well done with your poem in mono rhyme, and the same, one has to choose the "right" rhyme and you did. Well done, blessings Roy
Query : throwing a my left as I write. 2: still in its (site) sight?
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
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Most welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
QC,
I assume, because of the title, the grammatical errors are purposely done in this poem about why you write. The reasons are why most of us write.
If the errors are not on purpose, you don't need the 'a' in the last line of stanza two and it's should be its and toes should be toes'.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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QC,
I assume, because of the title, the grammatical errors are purposely done in this poem about why you write. The reasons are why most of us write.
If the errors are not on purpose, you don't need the 'a' in the last line of stanza two and it's should be its and toes should be toes'.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
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You?re welcome on both accounts, QC.
Joan
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi QC,
Great little ditty for this rhyming contest.
To have a mono rhyme in quadrants and make it work is no easy feat... so well done.
I'd just go back into edit and fix up a little typo with a missing apostrophe, or added word?
Never 'ILL' will wrongly I'll write.
But I guess even that goes with your theme?
All the very best in this contest QC.
With our thoughts we create...
a spontaneous flow.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Hi QC,
Great little ditty for this rhyming contest.
To have a mono rhyme in quadrants and make it work is no easy feat... so well done.
I'd just go back into edit and fix up a little typo with a missing apostrophe, or added word?
Never 'ILL' will wrongly I'll write.
But I guess even that goes with your theme?
All the very best in this contest QC.
With our thoughts we create...
a spontaneous flow.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
