Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

A very touching,
poem, dear poetess. The
writing of the Heather and
inclusion of the late
Princess Diana was very
heartfelt. Have a splendid
weekend. Blessings ~

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 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

Thanks for reading and for your kind words. I'm not really a poet. I think I do prose better, but now I don't have time and this is faster and forces me to write. Besides, I'd love to learn to write poetry and as they say, practice makes perfect.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your free verse, Heather.
You did a good job. There's smooth flow,
good pacing, and great imagery. You told
this story well. I like the ending. Your words
were descriptive with a great picture and video, too.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 21-May-2022

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reply by the author on 21-May-2022

I'm glad you liked it, Jan. It means a lot coming from you. Thanks for reading.