Limericks 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "I Know A Young Lady"A book of limericks
12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun Limerick Debra with just the right amount of cheekiness, good metre and fun rhymes, you made me smile, this girl is tickled pink, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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A fun Limerick Debra with just the right amount of cheekiness, good metre and fun rhymes, you made me smile, this girl is tickled pink, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Dolly :) Glad you enjoyed the read. Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh this is so much fun. An upbeat limerick for an upbeat young lady who always laughs like she is being tickled by a feather.
Written with that perfect anapestic signature metre and a delight to read and review today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Oh this is so much fun. An upbeat limerick for an upbeat young lady who always laughs like she is being tickled by a feather.
Written with that perfect anapestic signature metre and a delight to read and review today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gloria, for your kind feedback. Glad you enjoyed the read. Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Interesting that you used giddy to mean overexcitement. I thought the limerick was going to be about someone who spun around a lot and maybe ended up losing her balance!
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Interesting that you used giddy to mean overexcitement. I thought the limerick was going to be about someone who spun around a lot and maybe ended up losing her balance!
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Sarah :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Val Crisson
Really, liked this one a lot. The flow for a limerick is lovely, and the presentation is great. "It's like she sat on a feather" - tickled her fancy I guess. I love people like "Heather" but I am not. Yet, I learned from this little piece, that giddiness is not unreachable. Very fun read.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Really, liked this one a lot. The flow for a limerick is lovely, and the presentation is great. "It's like she sat on a feather" - tickled her fancy I guess. I love people like "Heather" but I am not. Yet, I learned from this little piece, that giddiness is not unreachable. Very fun read.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Hi Val :)
I'm not much like Heather, either!
Thanks for your feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Father Flaps
Good evening, Deb
How are you today? I'm just getting over a cold. Congestion in my chest finally broke this morning. Not 100% yet, but much better than Monday to Thursday.
I enjoyed your limerick! We have a woman in the worship team who's like Heather. Always up. Positive. Laughing. Smiling. Cathy Porter.
Tight rhymes and perfect 9-9-6-6-9 syllable form.
It's much easier to smile than frown! So they say~ Love your smile, my dear!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Good evening, Deb
How are you today? I'm just getting over a cold. Congestion in my chest finally broke this morning. Not 100% yet, but much better than Monday to Thursday.
I enjoyed your limerick! We have a woman in the worship team who's like Heather. Always up. Positive. Laughing. Smiling. Cathy Porter.
Tight rhymes and perfect 9-9-6-6-9 syllable form.
It's much easier to smile than frown! So they say~ Love your smile, my dear!
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Hello Kimbob :) I hope you have got over your cold.... not much fun for you..
Thank you for your lovely feedback. Much appreciated!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! A very happy limerick with its typical bouncy meter and the topic is about a very positive young lady who knows to keep life light and not get glum over whatever the weather.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Lol! A very happy limerick with its typical bouncy meter and the topic is about a very positive young lady who knows to keep life light and not get glum over whatever the weather.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you for your feedback, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Heather Knight
Cute and fun like you. And you know what's funny? I'm working on a poem about heather. Very different from this one, but it's a coincidence anyway. I guess I'll post it later.
Just looking at the whole thing makes me smile, but the poem is the best bit. Would still be even if you removed the great pic.
I don't know why I can't give you six stars...I still have two left. Weird.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Cute and fun like you. And you know what's funny? I'm working on a poem about heather. Very different from this one, but it's a coincidence anyway. I guess I'll post it later.
Just looking at the whole thing makes me smile, but the poem is the best bit. Would still be even if you removed the great pic.
I don't know why I can't give you six stars...I still have two left. Weird.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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LOL! Thanks for your feedback and glad you enjoyed the read :)
Sending love, Debra xx
Comment from jessizero
I love limericks, and this is a good one. It's clever and amusing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for sharing your limerick here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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I love limericks, and this is a good one. It's clever and amusing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you for sharing your limerick here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you for your feedback, Jessi :) Glad you enjoyed the read. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from juliaSjames
Hello Debra
I've had a stressful morning so reading this cute limerick is the tonic I needed. Sometimes being feather brained is just what the doctor ordered. LOL
Excellent limerick.
Titbit of useless information for you: my granddaughter has named her flute Heather.
Hope all's well with you my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Hello Debra
I've had a stressful morning so reading this cute limerick is the tonic I needed. Sometimes being feather brained is just what the doctor ordered. LOL
Excellent limerick.
Titbit of useless information for you: my granddaughter has named her flute Heather.
Hope all's well with you my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Hi Julia :) I love that your granddaughter gave her flute a name!
Thanks for your lovely feedback Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a childlike limerick, with impeccable rhymes and rhythm. I enjoyed reading it very much, particularly Heather being delighted and overexcited. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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This is a childlike limerick, with impeccable rhymes and rhythm. I enjoyed reading it very much, particularly Heather being delighted and overexcited. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Hi Kate :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
