Comment from
moongirlwriter
Too funny. Very clever writing and the graphic? Not sure why she has a daisy for a face. . .maybe innocence then when you see the expression, you realize. . .just ain't happening? A fun read and play on the rhyme. Best of luck with this in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
Comment from
T B Botts
Hi Rhonnie,
thanks for sharing this funny poem. This could be applied in today's society as well. The bible has already foretold all that is happening today, and as bad as it is now, in the end, God wins.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 20-May-2022