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Comment from Mark Schardine
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Time may have passed, years have gone by, but the sorrow remains. The beauty of the rose reflects the beauty of the life cut short, or one that we wish had lasted much longer.

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

reply by the author on 24-May-2022
    Thank you very much for your exceptional review. Hugs.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
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Interesting poem- Vivid description of a picture or painting- your description of a blue chiffon rose is clear - and that it is growing around a grave being watered with river of tears- good presentation

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

reply by the author on 22-May-2022
    Thank you, AP :)

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from lyenochka
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I hope someday I can see those blue roses you always mention. I've only seen the lavender roses. Here I can't grow roses because of the deer.
You painted a great picture with this poem with the tender grieving of "watered with river of tears."

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Unfortunately, there aren't any true blue roses, just hybrid ones. Thank you very much for your time and kind words, Helen. I appreciate it.

    Gypsy

Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful idea of having a blue chiffon rose as the flower for a grave, Gypsy. Your words expressed that tears kept it watered. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Hello, Aryr, it's so good to hear from you. I hope all is well. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be. Hugs!

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
reply by aryr on 20-May-2022
    Most welcome, Gypsy, Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from jessizero
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You always manage to say so much in so few syllables. This is no exception. The poem was beautiful, as were the images you selected to share. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Hello, Jessi, it's so good to hear from you. I hope all is well. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Happy weekend!

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
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Great poem, Gypsy! I didn't know blue chiffon roses existed, but now that I know, they might be my favorite! Your twist is slightly disturbing, as is intended. It makes my heart weep. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the club event!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Hello, Sam, it's so good to hear from you. I hope all is well. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy Blue Rose
    "The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus