Sports Nerd
I'm obsessed with sports.2 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This would be a temptation. The picture speaks volumes. It sounds like the person has a bad case of temptation. Whoever is in the picture did a great job. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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This would be a temptation. The picture speaks volumes. It sounds like the person has a bad case of temptation. Whoever is in the picture did a great job. Thank you for sharing this humorous poem.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Great visual with your title. It's a cute poem, but your rhyme scheme is not used consistently throughout the poem. Some stanzas have only 2 end rhyme lines (like stanza/verse #1) and others have more like the 4th verse has 4 rhyming lines. When the rhyme scheme is different throughout it throws off the rhythm of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Great visual with your title. It's a cute poem, but your rhyme scheme is not used consistently throughout the poem. Some stanzas have only 2 end rhyme lines (like stanza/verse #1) and others have more like the 4th verse has 4 rhyming lines. When the rhyme scheme is different throughout it throws off the rhythm of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you!
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The contest says that you can write a poem any style I would like. It is acceptable.
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Okay!
