Spring Love
a seasonal love poem21 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very nice. A good description of a new love. I especially liked:
A lanky youth and long-haired girl
repose upon a blanket spread
Because that's how it always seems to begin.
Well written, thank you.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Very nice. A good description of a new love. I especially liked:
A lanky youth and long-haired girl
repose upon a blanket spread
Because that's how it always seems to begin.
Well written, thank you.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Gary, I really appreciate your pointing out which lines appealed to you the most. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very nice. A good description of a new love. I especially liked:
A lanky youth and long-haired girl
repose upon a blanket spread
Because that's how it always seems to begin.
Well written, thank you.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Very nice. A good description of a new love. I especially liked:
A lanky youth and long-haired girl
repose upon a blanket spread
Because that's how it always seems to begin.
Well written, thank you.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
--An awesome entry for the Light and Sweet writing prompt contest. It's very romantic. I like the theme of nature, I love Greek mythology.
--It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Hello,
--An awesome entry for the Light and Sweet writing prompt contest. It's very romantic. I like the theme of nature, I love Greek mythology.
--It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
Well done! I wish you the best.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I am very flattered by your marvelous praise of SPRING LOVE, Gypsy. Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well presented, Mystery
Author. It had smooth flow, good rhymes, and
great imagery. The image is perfect. I enjoyed
reading your poem.
Best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Your contest entry is well presented, Mystery
Author. It had smooth flow, good rhymes, and
great imagery. The image is perfect. I enjoyed
reading your poem.
Best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Jan, for your praise of my poem.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I catch the drift but become uncomposed with such things as vagrant clouds? and Wild flowers swell like ocean wave??? I wish you well. The intent is clear. Love Springs Eternal.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I catch the drift but become uncomposed with such things as vagrant clouds? and Wild flowers swell like ocean wave??? I wish you well. The intent is clear. Love Springs Eternal.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing my poem, Tom.
Comment from jaded831
You set such a romantic setting, you brought back memories of my first love. Those romantic days are over for now, but reading your poem made it a reality once again. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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You set such a romantic setting, you brought back memories of my first love. Those romantic days are over for now, but reading your poem made it a reality once again. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I am delighted my poem brought back fond memories. Many thanks for sharing and your praise.
Comment from jessizero
This poem reminds me of the feeling of love in the spring of life. Congratulations on capturing that feeling well. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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This poem reminds me of the feeling of love in the spring of life. Congratulations on capturing that feeling well. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I am so pleased you think my poem captures the feeling of love in spring. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from LisaMay
Yours is the best contest entry I've read so far - definitely 'light and sweet' with a lovely feeling of dreamy romance and hesitant beginnings in your well-crafted words.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Yours is the best contest entry I've read so far - definitely 'light and sweet' with a lovely feeling of dreamy romance and hesitant beginnings in your well-crafted words.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Lisa, for your high praise of my poem.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written an composed poem, in a serenade to the age old sign of love, ah, spring, when a young man's fancy turns to love. I love the wording of this seasonal poem, the language is delightful well suited to this entry. The abcb ballad rhyming is likewise perfect, well done, good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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A beautifully written an composed poem, in a serenade to the age old sign of love, ah, spring, when a young man's fancy turns to love. I love the wording of this seasonal poem, the language is delightful well suited to this entry. The abcb ballad rhyming is likewise perfect, well done, good luck, Roy
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Many thanks, Roy, for your wonderful praise of my poem.
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Most welcome
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It was spring when I met my boyfriend turned husband. Everyday was like fresh sunshine. We were together every single day. It is so exciting to see him. I enjoyed reading your young love poem in spring. It exists. Have a wonderful day.
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reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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It was spring when I met my boyfriend turned husband. Everyday was like fresh sunshine. We were together every single day. It is so exciting to see him. I enjoyed reading your young love poem in spring. It exists. Have a wonderful day.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I am so pleased you can relate so easily to my Spring Love poem. Many thanks for sharing, Carolyn.
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You are welcome.
