Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Cute cute cute! Believe me you're not the only ones! It's too bad it has to be that way, but you have to get your rest. So I did something to make it not so lonely!
I picked out pictures of my husband and me traveling to special places and just those that were other special moments,printed 8x10s, framed them and made the wall by my bed full of the 2 of us, so if I get lonely, I just need to look up there on the wall and remember all our good times.it really helps. So asnyway I loved your work. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks for your read and feedback. And for the excellent idea.

Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Good

Tis the curse of growing older. The title is misspelled:

"Communting" I am certain should be "Commuting"

I have a rule; never, ever get separate beds, let alone separate bedrooms. You will be surprised how rapidly you can grow apart. Be careful.

I only downrated this piece because the title, the first thing seen, is misspelled.

 Comment Written 19-May-2022

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reply by the author on 19-May-2022

Thanks, have edited mistake.

reply by the author on 19-May-2022

I will edit and change the misspelling. Thanks for the heads-up.

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I like that this could be a sad poem if it wasn't for the sense of humour running through it. Love the interpretation of commuting - great idea, and a well realised poem to support it :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 18-May-2022

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reply by the author on 18-May-2022

Thank you for your read and feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a nice light humorous touch to these stanzas for the Write a Romance poem in any style -and a great visual to illustrate the lovers' dilemma - sweet dreams!

 Comment Written 18-May-2022

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reply by the author on 18-May-2022

Thank you for your read and feedback. Appreciated.