Dairy Fairy
The need is deep and primal!12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Not too primal I hope. This is beautifully written. But I must admit, milk is a wonderful thing. And what they can do with the by products is absolutely amazing. You wrote a modified sonnet in a sense, just 18 lines, smooth, articulate, and correct syllable count and rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Not too primal I hope. This is beautifully written. But I must admit, milk is a wonderful thing. And what they can do with the by products is absolutely amazing. You wrote a modified sonnet in a sense, just 18 lines, smooth, articulate, and correct syllable count and rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you, Roy :-). I'm tempted to call it a heroic sonnet with the extra stanza, but it doesn't meet the thematic structure and I hesitate to call it heroic!
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Then call a ?bold attempt? hah hah.
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is a humorous poem. It made me giggle. I wondered what one would write to a dairy, and you have captured the thought perfectly. I am wondering what kind of dairy offers sow's milk, as I've never thought about it before. I mean we do goats and sheep, buffalo, cow... why not pig? Great job thinking of a poem to fit this prompt, and congrats that it's a really good poem!
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This is a humorous poem. It made me giggle. I wondered what one would write to a dairy, and you have captured the thought perfectly. I am wondering what kind of dairy offers sow's milk, as I've never thought about it before. I mean we do goats and sheep, buffalo, cow... why not pig? Great job thinking of a poem to fit this prompt, and congrats that it's a really good poem!
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you, Sam :-). I had a lot of fun coming up with this!
