Kissed Back to the Beginning
Keeping the romance in a relationship16 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The Internet says, that you can get back those feelings of passion for your spouse. No matter what has happened in your relationship, as long as you are willing to put a little energy into it!
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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The Internet says, that you can get back those feelings of passion for your spouse. No matter what has happened in your relationship, as long as you are willing to put a little energy into it!
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Amen, I am inclined to agree. Sadly, few young couples want to exert the energy. Thanks for your review.
Comment from leather
Yep, I give this six stars. It is light and sweet--there are nice balances and repeats. The image works so well with the poem; the abstract design also keeps things light. Very nice work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Yep, I give this six stars. It is light and sweet--there are nice balances and repeats. The image works so well with the poem; the abstract design also keeps things light. Very nice work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your review and generous rating!
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is a nice poem, but I'm not sure I get the 'sweet and light' theme that the writing prompt requests. I feel the sweetness, yes, but a deepness, a drowning in the kiss rather than just a light and airyness. That aside, I think the poem is lovely! Also fits with the picture really well. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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This is a nice poem, but I'm not sure I get the 'sweet and light' theme that the writing prompt requests. I feel the sweetness, yes, but a deepness, a drowning in the kiss rather than just a light and airyness. That aside, I think the poem is lovely! Also fits with the picture really well. Nicely done!
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I wasn't exactly sure about the light requirement either. I think (I may be wrong) it meant that the poem would deal with only the goodness and upside of love. Thank you so much for your review and generous rating!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Kissed Back to the Beginning, is a fun and quickly read poem that sends a very understandable message of finding what worked back then, again. Cool.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This poem, Kissed Back to the Beginning, is a fun and quickly read poem that sends a very understandable message of finding what worked back then, again. Cool.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for rating it.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Now that is some wild colors. Reminds me of the sixties. That kiss will never be replaced. I enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great day. Stay safe. Great job.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Now that is some wild colors. Reminds me of the sixties. That kiss will never be replaced. I enjoyed reading your poem. Have a great day. Stay safe. Great job.
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Reminded me of the 60's too. Thank you for reading my poem and for rating it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was sweet, not to mention romantic. I like the idea of being so in love that things go back to the way they were at the start. Thank you for sharing this here.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This was sweet, not to mention romantic. I like the idea of being so in love that things go back to the way they were at the start. Thank you for sharing this here.
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem, and thank you for rating it.
