It Wasn't a Smart Move
Hippocampus contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Love it. Very witty and humorous. A very good effort for someone without a hippocampus! Lol. It is an excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Love it. Very witty and humorous. A very good effort for someone without a hippocampus! Lol. It is an excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you so much for the great review and stars, Wendy. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. Have a fantastic day.
Comment from LyndaS
I don't know anything about the anatomy of the brain, but I take it from reading this that this hippopotamus in your brain is responsible for intelligence. I think this piece qualifies as taking a train of thought and following it to a very clever place. I had to read it twice to get the humor because my hippopotamus wasn't working. A great tale of the ridiculous and I loved "luckily a donor had just arrived." LOL!! Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I don't know anything about the anatomy of the brain, but I take it from reading this that this hippopotamus in your brain is responsible for intelligence. I think this piece qualifies as taking a train of thought and following it to a very clever place. I had to read it twice to get the humor because my hippopotamus wasn't working. A great tale of the ridiculous and I loved "luckily a donor had just arrived." LOL!! Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Hahaha. Thank you so much for the hilarious review and big sixer, Lynda. Yeah, my hippo doesn't work that well sometimes. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
Comment from joann r romei
You did a great job with this story, it was humorous and original, and it read as if it was a real story someone was explaining. No errors noted in the work.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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You did a great job with this story, it was humorous and original, and it read as if it was a real story someone was explaining. No errors noted in the work.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Joann. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Earl Corp
You misspelled donor in the last sentence. This was an original creative take on the prompt. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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You misspelled donor in the last sentence. This was an original creative take on the prompt. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review and for catching the goof, Earl. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thanks again for the catch.
Comment from jessizero
This was a very funny post. I enjoyed reading it. You did a great job telling a funny story in under 300 words. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This was a very funny post. I enjoyed reading it. You did a great job telling a funny story in under 300 words. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I'd have given you five stars for the first paragraph - you got me smiling and kept it there for the whole read. No nits or suggestions - this is excellent.
Mike
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I'd have given you five stars for the first paragraph - you got me smiling and kept it there for the whole read. No nits or suggestions - this is excellent.
Mike
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Mike. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
Comment from Sama Bakht
I loved the humour in this piece, and a bit of learning too - now I know what a hippocampus is!
My favourite bit was about the flea Market skills :D. :D
Very enjoyable piece to read, and love the wordplay used is so many imaginative ways.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I loved the humour in this piece, and a bit of learning too - now I know what a hippocampus is!
My favourite bit was about the flea Market skills :D. :D
Very enjoyable piece to read, and love the wordplay used is so many imaginative ways.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Sama. Yeah, I never heard of hoppocampus until this contest came along. Lol. I just had to play around with it. I really appreciate the generous rating, Sama. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again.
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You're very, very welcome! :)
