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Comment from JoannaN
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Wow. This is such a gripping story, and it is written only in a hundred words. Your flash fiction is dynamic and well described. A good job. Indeed, an extreme Flash fiction.

 Comment Written 21-May-2022

reply by the author on 22-May-2022
    Thank you for this outstanding review, my friend.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from royowen
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I think this is a darn good entry in this flash fiction contest, the ending always needs to be a surprise, mild or otherwise and this is certainly that, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Roy. I enjoyed crafting this little piece.
    God bless!
Comment from John Ciarmello
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I enjoyed this; if I have it right, her husband missed her with the fatal arrow, and she killed him as he walked through the door. Nice! I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, John. I had fun with this one.
    God bless
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Yay! She got him. This story is very dramatic and descriptive, making it easy to visualize. It builds in suspense, with a satisfying ending. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you for this excellent review. I love the attention it's getting lol.
    God bless
Comment from Raul1
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. Looks like your going to win the contest. Good luck! No grammatical errors. It was fun reading it. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Raul. I loved the awesome review my friend.
    God bless
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Well, it is a captivating story but 100 words cannot do it justice. How did she get stab? When? And what happened at the end? Did she hit dead-center? Questions, left to the imagination.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Tom. I appreciate the great review and stars. I may have to dig into this one myself and see where it goes.
    God bless
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Loved this one. She got him back good and proper!! He should have made sure he'd killed her before he went to the bathroom!!!! Lol. Good for her, lovely twist at the end. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Sandra. I enjoyed crafting this challenging little piece. Love the stars and excellent review.
    God bless
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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You met the 100-word requirement on the nose while providing main character (Sadie), Setting (dimly lit room), conflict (home invader), resolution (shoot the bastard).

Nicely done, especially working with limited resources (100-words)

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Gary. Loved this excellent review my friend.
    God bless
reply by GARY MACLEAN on 20-May-2022
    This was my first choice by the way. You make me want to read the book - lol.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Wow! Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
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I read this yesterday but didn't have time to review it. Now In see it is a bit different; the reference to the shoulder is changed, and the severed spine is gone. It is still very gruesome and scary - great horror/thriller impact.

Comments:

She could hear her attacker in the master bath
(Is he actually in the bath? I think 'bathroom' would be better.)

She could hear her attacker in the master bath,(add comma) but couldn't see him. Sadie grabbed the bow,(add comma) sliding the arrow into place.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Lisa, for the excellent and helpful review.
    God bless
Comment from Wendy G
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Well this one met the brief - there was certainly everything, right to the gory resolution! Written clearly and well, so I send good wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you, Wendy. I certainly enjoyed the challenge. Thank you for the best wishes as well.
    God bless!