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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Jessie Eldora
Excellent
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Well, this is a real 'eye opener'. "Bravo!" Awareness for sure. Piece is well written. I will go-back and read the Linked chapters above. - Jessie.



 Comment Written 17-May-2022

reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    Mom I'm so glad somebody new is impressed with my work thanks for reviewing this Jessie.
    Doctor Ricky 1025
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from Eunice Amero
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

wow, Really. You were dead and came back. You can't depend on our hearts and especially to go up in a helicopter my heart would stop too. Good poem. Good work and good luck.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

reply by the author on 21-May-2022
    Unfortunately Eunice this is based on my son Jason and not a situation with me.
    And yes I was involved but not to that degree.
    I sure wish it was me instead.
    Thanks,
    Have a blessed Sabbath Sunday!
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Eunice Amero on 21-May-2022
    Really thats a shame. Feel for you. If l leave here l will miss you all.
reply by the author on 22-May-2022