Inspire Somewhere
A poem.6 total reviews
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Excellent poem!! The illustration is graphic and grabbed me by the throat.
Your carefully chosen words are honest and inspiring. You speak of embracing your muse, well you have done just that here.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Excellent poem!! The illustration is graphic and grabbed me by the throat.
Your carefully chosen words are honest and inspiring. You speak of embracing your muse, well you have done just that here.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Thank you for sharing this inspirational writing. I could use a little muse right now, it seems to be dead at the moment. I enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your writing. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this inspirational writing. I could use a little muse right now, it seems to be dead at the moment. I enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your writing. Nicely done.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
Very nice. Your poem is inspirational. Someone in need of encouragement will no doubt be inspired to do a better job of creating that masterwork that is hiding deep in their unconscious mind waiting to be awakened and transferred into a poem or story that inspire the very next person to read it.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Very nice. Your poem is inspirational. Someone in need of encouragement will no doubt be inspired to do a better job of creating that masterwork that is hiding deep in their unconscious mind waiting to be awakened and transferred into a poem or story that inspire the very next person to read it.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from judiverse
Excellent subject. Great advice to embrace your muse. Excellent rhyme. In your first stanza, the word you want aspire. "Aspire" is what you dream of doing. Others "inspire" you with their words or examples. Your last line is repetitious as you refer to fiction, books, and histories. In the second stanza, you might use "Your writing will be fantastic" as you're looking to the future. judi
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Excellent subject. Great advice to embrace your muse. Excellent rhyme. In your first stanza, the word you want aspire. "Aspire" is what you dream of doing. Others "inspire" you with their words or examples. Your last line is repetitious as you refer to fiction, books, and histories. In the second stanza, you might use "Your writing will be fantastic" as you're looking to the future. judi
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistakes.
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You're welcome. Hope this helped. judi
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It did. Thanks!
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the fast pace of this poem, shooting through to the end with barely a breath. The message is awesome - to spread the gift of inspiration.
One note:
'it is in every histories' - I'm not sure what you mean by this line.
Mike
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I love the fast pace of this poem, shooting through to the end with barely a breath. The message is awesome - to spread the gift of inspiration.
One note:
'it is in every histories' - I'm not sure what you mean by this line.
Mike
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you! Please read it again. Does it make sense now? I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
Because I know my muse, He's always worthy of worship, so I do. I sometimes get more it's comfortable to write, but then He's the most magnanimous person I know, good advice Raul, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Because I know my muse, He's always worthy of worship, so I do. I sometimes get more it's comfortable to write, but then He's the most magnanimous person I know, good advice Raul, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you!
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