Forever Remembered
Tetractys Entry12 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I have one of those, too. Her name was Lainie. Thank you for sharing your memories of a precious fur baby. Your syllables were perfect for the prompt. Best wishes to you.
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I have one of those, too. Her name was Lainie. Thank you for sharing your memories of a precious fur baby. Your syllables were perfect for the prompt. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A dog is a best friend for sure. Like your poem and image. It warms the heart to see a dog so loved. I for one know your feeling. It will be a year since our dog left this earth in June.
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A dog is a best friend for sure. Like your poem and image. It warms the heart to see a dog so loved. I for one know your feeling. It will be a year since our dog left this earth in June.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
We humans are weak. We so easily get in a position of dependence upon our cherished pets. We too lost a family dog that will never ever be forgotten. We think of her daily.
Very sad in it's brevity but so nicely done. Thanks.
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We humans are weak. We so easily get in a position of dependence upon our cherished pets. We too lost a family dog that will never ever be forgotten. We think of her daily.
Very sad in it's brevity but so nicely done. Thanks.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Well done for fitting this into the syllable count for the contest. You could have put:
"She
Remains
In my mind
And in my heart", but what you've got works too.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Well done for fitting this into the syllable count for the contest. You could have put:
"She
Remains
In my mind
And in my heart", but what you've got works too.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. How did you get a picture of my dog? Amazing how it resembles my bearded collie, Buddy. Saved him from a pound thirteen years and counting. Still, as spry as a zephyr.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Wow. How did you get a picture of my dog? Amazing how it resembles my bearded collie, Buddy. Saved him from a pound thirteen years and counting. Still, as spry as a zephyr.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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It's amazing how alike some dogs are. We lost her a year ago due to diabetes.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful one. I can relate to this one. You have expressed this well, as all who have lost a loved dog will agree. The only suggestion would be to consider using "heart" instead of "mind", although of course they remain in both heart and mind. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Beautiful one. I can relate to this one. You have expressed this well, as all who have lost a loved dog will agree. The only suggestion would be to consider using "heart" instead of "mind", although of course they remain in both heart and mind. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks for your review. I used mind to reiterate that she is always thought of.
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Ah yes. For years I couldn?t go near the pet food aisle at the supermarket. It?s those little things?. And ?heart? would probably have been too predictable you chose wisely.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
An awesome entry for the Tetractys Contest. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
The theme is interesting heart-felt and sad. Pets are part of the family.
Well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Hello,
An awesome entry for the Tetractys Contest. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
The theme is interesting heart-felt and sad. Pets are part of the family.
Well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks for your review. She was a definite part of our family
Comment from Fleedleflump
There's no connection quite like the one we share with our faithful animals. That love and devotion comes through clearly in every line of your poem. I very much enjoyed this one.
Mike
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There's no connection quite like the one we share with our faithful animals. That love and devotion comes through clearly in every line of your poem. I very much enjoyed this one.
Mike
Comment Written 17-May-2022
Comment from Pantygynt
I feel sure I have seen this before, and fairly recently too. Or something very close indeed to it. I wonder if anyone else has that sense of deja vu.
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I feel sure I have seen this before, and fairly recently too. Or something very close indeed to it. I wonder if anyone else has that sense of deja vu.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
She is so cute. I know you miss her. Dogs are like children. I hate to hear about you losing your precious dog. This is a great tribute. Good night. Take care.
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She is so cute. I know you miss her. Dogs are like children. I hate to hear about you losing your precious dog. This is a great tribute. Good night. Take care.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
