Travis
Two years after losing his dad, he joined him in Heaven34 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is just too sad, Debi, I don't know if I could have coped had that happened to mine. My first husband died of cancer, (nearly 40 years ago) and it was my two sons that kept me going. If I'd lost either of them as well, I'd have gone insane. Life can be so cruel, it's always the nicest people that go first, there is a song, 'Only the Good Die Young' by Billy Joel. (1977) And isn't that so true? I'm sorry for your loss, my friend. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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That is just too sad, Debi, I don't know if I could have coped had that happened to mine. My first husband died of cancer, (nearly 40 years ago) and it was my two sons that kept me going. If I'd lost either of them as well, I'd have gone insane. Life can be so cruel, it's always the nicest people that go first, there is a song, 'Only the Good Die Young' by Billy Joel. (1977) And isn't that so true? I'm sorry for your loss, my friend. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Sandra, thank you for your kind review and caring comments. Of course I still miss them both dearly, but it's going on ten years and God see's us through. Funny you should mention my favorite singer's song, because at first my 7 syllable line read, "and only the good die young." Then I changed it, as I wanted to say something for my brother as well. Some days the tears still fall, but good memories follow. This has been on my list of poems to write for some time now, and with my brother's birthday nearing I decided I had to get it scratched off my list. I am thankful to write about happier things for now on. Thanks again, my friend for your kind review and very lovely words.
Comment from royowen
Isn't that just terrible? I'll never understand why some families have real tragedy, and others don't seem to have any problems, but that's probably not necessarily true either, well done, Debi, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Isn't that just terrible? I'll never understand why some families have real tragedy, and others don't seem to have any problems, but that's probably not necessarily true either, well done, Debi, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Y'know I think it is pretty true of some. My best friend who's a couple years older than me, Never lost anyone in her life until she lost her father, at 65.
I am done telling sad stories for a while.
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So sad
Comment from karenina
This is tragic! How can we help but ask God why? So sorry for the loss of your brother and nephew! I can't begin n to comprehend the grief!
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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This is tragic! How can we help but ask God why? So sorry for the loss of your brother and nephew! I can't begin n to comprehend the grief!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Karenina, thank you for your kind review and caring comments. Of course I still miss them both dearly, but it's going on ten years and God see's us through. There are still days that are sad and the tears fall, but I always try to replace them with good memories. This has been on my list of poems to write for some time now, and with my brother's birthday nearing I decided I had to get it scratched off my list. I am thankful to write about happier things for now on. Thanks again, my friend for your kind review and very lovely words.
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There does come a time when we grieve--but remember with a smile.
I know this to be true from the loss of my parents. Birthdays are always times for remembering... You honor them both!
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Thank you dear friend!
Comment from Whitewave
Debi,
Yes, so sad. Yes, why God?
Stunningly beautiful photos that break the heart and shine from within.
Pain like that doesn't die but the love doesn't die either - even grows stronger. Cherished memories, embedded in your heart, will keep that love alive forever.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Debi,
Yes, so sad. Yes, why God?
Stunningly beautiful photos that break the heart and shine from within.
Pain like that doesn't die but the love doesn't die either - even grows stronger. Cherished memories, embedded in your heart, will keep that love alive forever.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and caring comments. That is so true that the love and the pain don't die, but is replaced by memories and some days, tears and sadness. I just try to replace them with happy memories. I still miss them both dearly, but it's going on ten years and God see's us through. This has been on my list of poems to write for some time now, and with my brother's birthday nearing I decided I had to get it scratched off my list. Neither of them would want me dwelling on what we can't change. I am thankful to write about happier things for now on. Thanks again, my friend for your kind review and very lovely words.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Oh no. This is why I have always shied away from getting too personal on the Internet. I learn to appreciate talking with certain personalities, but then I learn of their heartache. I am so sorry for you Debi.
I have lost 10 siblings, two I never even met, four whom I knew of or about, and four who I grew up with and shared so much with. There are three of us left and we know what lies ahead. Loss is so painful, and we are so helpless. Does the pain ever go away?
I know a certain amount of time has passed but is it ever long enough? I still feel for you, I know that void is still there.
I really liked the simplicity but thoroughness of your poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Oh no. This is why I have always shied away from getting too personal on the Internet. I learn to appreciate talking with certain personalities, but then I learn of their heartache. I am so sorry for you Debi.
I have lost 10 siblings, two I never even met, four whom I knew of or about, and four who I grew up with and shared so much with. There are three of us left and we know what lies ahead. Loss is so painful, and we are so helpless. Does the pain ever go away?
I know a certain amount of time has passed but is it ever long enough? I still feel for you, I know that void is still there.
I really liked the simplicity but thoroughness of your poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thanks Gary, for the very kind review and comments.
These two were not part of those that I wrote about in
"Worst six months ever" as these were much more recent.
Long before I joined FS, I had a list of those things and people that I wanted to write about about, as I knew it would help give me closure. My brother and I had an argument about something stupid and I didn't make my peace with him before he died and I have lived with the guilt ever since..
So how is it that you didn't know so some of your siblings?
Thanks again!
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Still, a very sad tale Debi.
I didn't know some of my siblings because they were gone before my birth. A sister passed in a car accident just about when I was maybe 3 or 4 years old. Another brother died in a car accident when he was only eight months old.
Everybody has a tale to tell. Life rarely takes it easy on any of us. My losses are no different or greater than yours or the next persons. It's just that a loss of life is always sorrowful, no matter the circumstances or the reason.
I hope your day brightens as it unfolds.
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I am done telling sad stories for a while. But I do have a happy one, as tomorrow my husband Glen and I will be married 48 years. It doesn't seem possible, but actually together for 50 yrs if you count 2 yrs of dating.
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Man, that is a wonderful achievement. Super congratulations. You simply do not find that anymore. I have one brother who has been married (to the same woman - lol) for 50 years. But that is out of 13 kids total. In addition, every one of our five kids have been divorced at least once.
It took me three times to find my one true love. We just (this past Saturday, the 14th) celebrated our 28th glorious year together. I have never been happier, and I expect it to continue as long as these brown eyes can see the morning sun.
Again, my sincere congratulations
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I'm not sure why i share so much with you Gary. I think it's because from the start you told me about your lovely wife that made me think so much of you. Tomorrow I am posting a happy poem, called our wedding vows, in honor of our anniversary. I just wrote it this morning. Not that it's a big deal, but truly wanted it to also be my next milestone. I think I'm pretty close.
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Well, it's nice having a consistent "sharing" buddy on a new writing site. I have been here not even a month yet. I appreciate you taking time out to talk.
I'll keep an eye out for the new one. I think I am getting messages whenever you post, so I shouldn't miss it.
I'm sure it's going to be a good one.
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Thank you kind Sir. 😉
As soon as I hit that Milestone, I am going to take a break from writing and pay you and some others back and review more of your work. Only 5 left, they say.
Comment from Goosey Gander
This is such a lovely poem! I think this is so awfully depressing, though! I love this poem, and yet it is so horrible! I do not mean to be offensive. The poem=amazing. Story it tells=terrible/terribly sad. You have done a beautiful job. Thank you very much for sharing this spectacular poem!
-GG
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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This is such a lovely poem! I think this is so awfully depressing, though! I love this poem, and yet it is so horrible! I do not mean to be offensive. The poem=amazing. Story it tells=terrible/terribly sad. You have done a beautiful job. Thank you very much for sharing this spectacular poem!
-GG
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you so very much for your most generous six stars for your kind review and caring comments. They are both appreciated more than I can tell you!! And while it is so true that the pain and the love are still always there and I still miss them both dearly, but it's going on ten years and God see's us through. This has been on my list of poems to write for some time now, and with my brother's birthday nearing I decided I had to get it scratched off my list. Neither of them would want me dwelling on what we can't change. I am thankful to write about happier things for now on. Thanks again, my friend for your kind review, very lovely words and the exceptional 6 stars.
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a sad, sad poem, telling of not one, but two tragic deaths two years apart, and happening close to each other. With our limited human understanding, we cannot hope to comprehend God's plan or make any sense of such a tragic occurrence. All we can do is grieve and offer our grief to God, asking for healing and peace. I am glad to see that you have a faith which will support and sustain you throughout life. You have had reason to throw yourself on its strength in the past, don't fear to do so again at rocky parts underfoot on Life's journey. Please know that your loved ones are well, safe and happy in God's care.
You will see them again when you take the :Rainbow Bridge" on your way "Home".
cheers Cass
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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This is a sad, sad poem, telling of not one, but two tragic deaths two years apart, and happening close to each other. With our limited human understanding, we cannot hope to comprehend God's plan or make any sense of such a tragic occurrence. All we can do is grieve and offer our grief to God, asking for healing and peace. I am glad to see that you have a faith which will support and sustain you throughout life. You have had reason to throw yourself on its strength in the past, don't fear to do so again at rocky parts underfoot on Life's journey. Please know that your loved ones are well, safe and happy in God's care.
You will see them again when you take the :Rainbow Bridge" on your way "Home".
cheers Cass
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Cass, I can't thank you enough for such a kind review and caring comments. That means so much to me. That is so true that the love and the pain don't die, and although some days, have tears and sadness. I just try to replace them with happy memories. I still miss them both dearly, but it's going on ten years and you're right, that God see's us through. This has been on my list of poems to write for some time now, and with my brother's birthday nearing I decided I had to get it scratched off my list. Neither of them would want me dwelling on what we can't change. I am thankful to write about happier things for now on. Thanks again, my friend for your kind review and very lovely words.
Comment from Wendy G
Such a poignant sad poem. What enormous grief for the family. We will never understand such happenings. Beautiful writing. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Such a poignant sad poem. What enormous grief for the family. We will never understand such happenings. Beautiful writing. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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I know it's two sad poems in the last week, but I had a long list of poems that I wanted to write to get these losses out of my system, yet the older we get the faster they come. So thank you so much again for your lovely review an words!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Debi,
This is just tragic, I can't even imagine such a thing happening to one family. I'm so sorry for your loss. Well done on your five line poem.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Hello Debi,
This is just tragic, I can't even imagine such a thing happening to one family. I'm so sorry for your loss. Well done on your five line poem.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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I know it's two sad poems in the last week, but I had a long list of poems that I wanted to write to get these losses out of my system, yet the older we get the faster they come. So thank you so much again for your lovely review an words!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a sad poem and yet one filled with joy as they both knew God and received his promise of eternal life. Very nice memorial you have for them. They were both such handsome young guys. Your poem is very straightforward and well-constructed.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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What a sad poem and yet one filled with joy as they both knew God and received his promise of eternal life. Very nice memorial you have for them. They were both such handsome young guys. Your poem is very straightforward and well-constructed.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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I know it's two sad poems in the last week, but I had a long list of poems that I wanted to write to get these losses out of my system, yet the older we get the faster they come. So thank you so much again for your lovely review and words!
