One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from royowen
I can't but like this one dear Gypsy, a fluid choir, chattering melodically and in great acapella harmonies, this is brilliantly written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I can't but like this one dear Gypsy, a fluid choir, chattering melodically and in great acapella harmonies, this is brilliantly written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Blessings to you too, Roy.
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Welcome
Comment from aryr
This was a great haiku, Gypsy, because it showed the action of the creek in the poem. I really enjoyed your words, which were so descriptive. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Sorry I had to erase at least 80 poems and stories since I was gone from early last week until yesterday, thank goodness I am back, lol. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy, because it showed the action of the creek in the poem. I really enjoyed your words, which were so descriptive. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Sorry I had to erase at least 80 poems and stories since I was gone from early last week until yesterday, thank goodness I am back, lol. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello,
thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kind feedback. Blessed be and hugs :)
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Very nice presentation for your Ekphrastic Haiku club entry. You selected a most interesting illustration for others to paint their images in words.
Your meandering creek creates the sound of forest music.
Mark
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Gypsy,
Very nice presentation for your Ekphrastic Haiku club entry. You selected a most interesting illustration for others to paint their images in words.
Your meandering creek creates the sound of forest music.
Mark
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, Mark,
thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy,
the picture set it up... your words solidified the image in thought and a sense of feeling and auditory, especially following the zig zag looking at surrounds of the forest... and then the magic as the 'fluid choir' brings it all together as your satori.
Being someone who loves water movement, creeks, waterfalls, rapids in relation to the sound and hypnotic musical effect, this is just what one would imagine it to be.
Beautiful art form!
With our thoughts we create...
mind imagery.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hi Gypsy,
the picture set it up... your words solidified the image in thought and a sense of feeling and auditory, especially following the zig zag looking at surrounds of the forest... and then the magic as the 'fluid choir' brings it all together as your satori.
Being someone who loves water movement, creeks, waterfalls, rapids in relation to the sound and hypnotic musical effect, this is just what one would imagine it to be.
Beautiful art form!
With our thoughts we create...
mind imagery.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, James,
thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
It sounds indeed looks like a "zig zag creek"--
I am starting to get a feel for this ekphrastic thing... I do believe I'll give it a try here, pretty soon!
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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It sounds indeed looks like a "zig zag creek"--
I am starting to get a feel for this ekphrastic thing... I do believe I'll give it a try here, pretty soon!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, Karenina,
thank you very much for the kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.
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You too!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is so unique to walk through the back woods of a forest. To stumble up on a creek cut through those woods surrounding many trees. To gather hickory nuts and a rock and sit there for hours. Getting your feet wet to cool down from the sun's heat in the south.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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It is so unique to walk through the back woods of a forest. To stumble up on a creek cut through those woods surrounding many trees. To gather hickory nuts and a rock and sit there for hours. Getting your feet wet to cool down from the sun's heat in the south.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, Carolyn,
thank you very much. I appreciate your kind feedback. Take care.
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You are welcome.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation showing the zig zag of the creek- meandering through the forest- tying sound to the poem in the satori - good job! I had difficulty with that - nicely done â?"ï¸?
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I like your poem- good presentation showing the zig zag of the creek- meandering through the forest- tying sound to the poem in the satori - good job! I had difficulty with that - nicely done â?"ï¸?
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, AP,
thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! And it makes me think of the flow of musical notes that is smooth like the river's flow. Great use of alliteration and metaphor. That zigzag is really evident in the picture!
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I like it! And it makes me think of the flow of musical notes that is smooth like the river's flow. Great use of alliteration and metaphor. That zigzag is really evident in the picture!
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hello, Helen,
thank you very much for the insightful review. I am happy you like it. I appreciate your kind feedback.
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Comment from Regina Elliott
A beauty to behold. I really
love Japanese poetry,
Gypsy Blue Rose. You are
very knowledgeable about
the elements of it. Wishing
you a wondrous week of
creativity. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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A beauty to behold. I really
love Japanese poetry,
Gypsy Blue Rose. You are
very knowledgeable about
the elements of it. Wishing
you a wondrous week of
creativity. Blessings ~
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Regina,
I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars! I am glad you like it.
Gypsy hugs
