Growing old
Remembering what I used to be able to do.15 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is strange, time goes by in a flash with every movement of the clock. For years, we were busy as bees. Next, we are lucky to be standing with mended joints in our knees. We have many aches and pains, yet we want freedom. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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It is strange, time goes by in a flash with every movement of the clock. For years, we were busy as bees. Next, we are lucky to be standing with mended joints in our knees. We have many aches and pains, yet we want freedom. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ja Majal
Old? You are still in the epitome of youth!! :)
Great entry into the contest, there is great quality in quiet times,
times of reflection and reminiscences, as you are conveying in this poem!!
Thank you!
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Old? You are still in the epitome of youth!! :)
Great entry into the contest, there is great quality in quiet times,
times of reflection and reminiscences, as you are conveying in this poem!!
Thank you!
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Fellow poet thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. Good job and good luck in the contest. Nice photo. Have a good day!
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Hello Fellow poet thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. Good job and good luck in the contest. Nice photo. Have a good day!
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thanls!
Comment from RodG
The Speaker could easily be me talking as I approach my eighth decade. I, too, enjoy the quiet times the most. You convey your message quite well in this challenging format.
Rod
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reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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The Speaker could easily be me talking as I approach my eighth decade. I, too, enjoy the quiet times the most. You convey your message quite well in this challenging format.
Rod
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Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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At 74, I'm learning this message daily! Thanks for reading!
Comment from Pantygynt
This one complies precisely with the laid down requirements of a tetractys poem. It is an exercise in being concise. The poor reviewer on the other hand has to write one hundred and fifty characters. Who has the harder task?
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reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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This one complies precisely with the laid down requirements of a tetractys poem. It is an exercise in being concise. The poor reviewer on the other hand has to write one hundred and fifty characters. Who has the harder task?
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Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Grin. I know the struggle!
