Blood Moon Overture
Ekphrastic Haiku7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ekphrastic Haiku
Blood Moon Overture
by Debra White
Excellent entry for the club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done!
gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Ekphrastic Haiku
Blood Moon Overture
by Debra White
Excellent entry for the club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done!
gypsy hugs
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy :) I'm really happy that you liked this one. The picture is gorgeous - great choice!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have adequately and beautifully captured, in a Haiku, the essence of the illustration. The title is perfect. I appreciate the added information about rare cranes included in your author notes. As a musician, I can almost hear the overture.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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You have adequately and beautifully captured, in a Haiku, the essence of the illustration. The title is perfect. I appreciate the added information about rare cranes included in your author notes. As a musician, I can almost hear the overture.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a magical sceptical here and my imagination ran riot with the scene. These cranes play as the moon blushes, much enjoyed Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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You created a magical sceptical here and my imagination ran riot with the scene. These cranes play as the moon blushes, much enjoyed Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the read :) Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from karenina
Elegant in both presentation and word...
Of course I had to run off to determine what "agnostic signalling" was...
You keep me on my toes, Debra!
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Elegant in both presentation and word...
Of course I had to run off to determine what "agnostic signalling" was...
You keep me on my toes, Debra!
Karenina
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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LOL! Thanks for your lovely feedback, Karenina :) I'm learning as I go!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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I think that's what life (and poetry) all are about! Smiles....
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For sure :) x
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
Great poem-as with all Haiku, the objective is twofold, to portray a vivid scene in a few words, and to 'wake up' the reader to notice a brief momentary insight into something beyond herself, or himself. This work does that for me.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Great poem-as with all Haiku, the objective is twofold, to portray a vivid scene in a few words, and to 'wake up' the reader to notice a brief momentary insight into something beyond herself, or himself. This work does that for me.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate it :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
I was wondering why all they crane posts, it's obviously something like a picture this prompt, and of course you've done a great job of writing this haiku post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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I was wondering why all they crane posts, it's obviously something like a picture this prompt, and of course you've done a great job of writing this haiku post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you, Roy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Bless you
Comment from lyenochka
A timely poem as it's supposed to be the Blood Flower moon tonight with the lunar eclipse. In Japanese culture, the crane symbolizes a long, happy marriage. But the red orb is more likely the sun just as their flag has that red circle to symbolize the land of the sun.
Enjoyed your ekphrastic haiku!
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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A timely poem as it's supposed to be the Blood Flower moon tonight with the lunar eclipse. In Japanese culture, the crane symbolizes a long, happy marriage. But the red orb is more likely the sun just as their flag has that red circle to symbolize the land of the sun.
Enjoyed your ekphrastic haiku!
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Ah.... ok, thanks for the heads up, Helen :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
