Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from judiverse
Happy graduation! Enjoy! Have a safe trip. I didn't realize how similar modern day ranching could be to the old times of riding horseback and fighting cattle rustlers. As I read this I was a bit concerned about having Gary Hart hit on Ali almost immediately. You've handled the Pat situation just fine with Ali getting other women he's made unwelcome advances to together and encouraging them to pursue lawsuits. But Gary? I just think it's somewhat repetitious. With the same name as that presidential candidate of some years ago, whose monkey business was exposed, maybe his behavior is to be expected. Ali doesn't always need to be the damsel in distress that Cord has to keep rescuing. Just my thoughts. judi
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Happy graduation! Enjoy! Have a safe trip. I didn't realize how similar modern day ranching could be to the old times of riding horseback and fighting cattle rustlers. As I read this I was a bit concerned about having Gary Hart hit on Ali almost immediately. You've handled the Pat situation just fine with Ali getting other women he's made unwelcome advances to together and encouraging them to pursue lawsuits. But Gary? I just think it's somewhat repetitious. With the same name as that presidential candidate of some years ago, whose monkey business was exposed, maybe his behavior is to be expected. Ali doesn't always need to be the damsel in distress that Cord has to keep rescuing. Just my thoughts. judi
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for your thoughts. I will consider that. I appreciate the kind review.
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You're welcome. Just a thought. I just don't like Ali coming off as constantly needing protection. As I wrote, the story involving was well presented, and it showed her achieving something for other women out of it. judi
Comment from nomi338
Please be careful, your fans will miss you until you return. Congratulations on the accomplishment of your grand daughters graduating from high school. Your story is a comfort to read and your characters have become very real to me. I enjoy keeping up with their exploits.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Please be careful, your fans will miss you until you return. Congratulations on the accomplishment of your grand daughters graduating from high school. Your story is a comfort to read and your characters have become very real to me. I enjoy keeping up with their exploits.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the encouraging review and the well wishes.
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I care.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written. Good work.
A whole lotta kissin' goin' on, it seems like.
It doesn't seem plausible that Alexandra would take then chance that Cord would leave out without a send off, chancing that she awakens.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Nicely written. Good work.
A whole lotta kissin' goin' on, it seems like.
It doesn't seem plausible that Alexandra would take then chance that Cord would leave out without a send off, chancing that she awakens.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Ali has kissed Cordon the cheek. He hasn't kissed her, yet.
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
This is a well written chapter in your book. Good job. I look forward to reading more. Have fun on your holiday. Hopefully, you find time to write and post.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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This is a well written chapter in your book. Good job. I look forward to reading more. Have fun on your holiday. Hopefully, you find time to write and post.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and the well wishes.
Comment from Judy Lawless
That kiss just keeps getting postponed! lol. Another exciting chapter, Barbara. There is so much going on with the ranch, Alexandra and Cordero don't have much time to really talk about things. Maybe that will change once the cattle thieves are caught. Well done.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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That kiss just keeps getting postponed! lol. Another exciting chapter, Barbara. There is so much going on with the ranch, Alexandra and Cordero don't have much time to really talk about things. Maybe that will change once the cattle thieves are caught. Well done.
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're most welcome, Barbara.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed reading this. All of the chapters are good. Alexandra does seem to be in trouble a lot but most of time, it isn't her fault. I guess the cowboy can't control themselves around a pretty lady. Have a good trip. It sounds like fun. I know you'll enjoy being with your grandchildren and family.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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I enjoyed reading this. All of the chapters are good. Alexandra does seem to be in trouble a lot but most of time, it isn't her fault. I guess the cowboy can't control themselves around a pretty lady. Have a good trip. It sounds like fun. I know you'll enjoy being with your grandchildren and family.
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and well wishes.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Gary was a bit of a goon, wasn't he? Any man that thinks he can just go and take advantage of a woman like he did, is right out of order. I'm glad Cord was there to stop him. Cord is right though, she certainly does get herself into some awkward fixes. Well done, Barbara. Enjoy your granddaughter's graduation! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Gary was a bit of a goon, wasn't he? Any man that thinks he can just go and take advantage of a woman like he did, is right out of order. I'm glad Cord was there to stop him. Cord is right though, she certainly does get herself into some awkward fixes. Well done, Barbara. Enjoy your granddaughter's graduation! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and the well wishes.
