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Color Blind

A lot of rental cars look alike

18 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This fifty-word humorous story, Color Blind, has the proper word count and reminds all of us of that time we picked the wrong car from the parking lot and perhaps even entered it. Always made more fun with witnesses.

 Comment Written 18-May-2022


reply by the author on 18-May-2022
    Hi Bill, thanks for taking the time to read and review this story. I heard about that little incident for quite a long time, and even years later, it still comes up at times.
    Have a blessed day.
    Tom
Comment from pome lover
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That's funny, Bill. The gals had a laugh on dad.
My daughter and I both have white SUVs, as does the whole world, it seems. I know my license plate number, if I can just remember where I parked it.
Cute story!

 Comment Written 18-May-2022


reply by the author on 18-May-2022
    Thanks for the great review and comments. At the time that we rented the car, I was in Juneau, and that year the color of the year was maroon. Every other car was maroon, and all the makes look alike. It was frustrating. Oh well.
    Have a blessed evening gal.
    Tom
reply by pome lover on 18-May-2022
    thanks. You, too.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written 50 word humor story you have penned for the writing prompt. I have to agree with you as I was confused about our cat in the parking lot at our church and the pastor's. They seemed to be the same color, but not make! Thanks for the laugh. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thanks for the kind review and comments. When I was growing up a person could tell a Pontiac from a Ford Fairlane, now they all look alike.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I bet if this scenario actually happened you would be frightened instead of finding it humorous. The cops would be called. Have you ever come out of a store and tried to find where you parked your car? What if a man would be sitting in your car? What would you do?

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    I thought about someone calling the cops. Fortunately this happened years ago when people were less scared of each other and their motives. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from GTG345
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I don't own a car being a 11th grader but I really don't hope that I will get a car that most people own around the area. I want something unique and old that still works and stands out to other cars. Great work and keep it up.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thanks so much for the great review Adam. There is something to be said about having a car that is a different color. If you decide to buy one like that, just make sure you can get matching paint from the dealer in case you ever need to touch it up.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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It has become a black and white world, though cars are rarely seen in black. Discrimination, I guess. A toehold to maintain supremacy? The media will tell you so. Anyway, your story is funny and besides so many being white, the makes all look alike.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review this story. At the time, the popular color was maroon. Every other car in the parking lots was maroon. Fortunately that color doesn't match anyone's skin, so no calls of discrimination.
reply by Tom Horonzy on 17-May-2022
    I was speaking cars, as to my last "so many being white" and I too have trouble identifying my Edge vs all others.
Comment from Wendy G
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And that's why my next car will not be white! I have made such a mistake more than once! I enjoyed your write and it resonated with me. Very well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and comments. The popular color for cars at the time was maroon. I couldn't find a picture of a maroon car though. It seems every year there is one color that the manufacturers all seem to choose. It's frustrating.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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We have all done this. The worst was a friend of mine who parked in the supermarket capark whilst mooching round the charity shop without buying anything. She then drove home, settled down for the rest of the weekend, and on the Wednesday when it was her turn to do the school run, opened her car boot for the kid's satchels to find it full of bags of spoiling fresh and obviously once frozen food. The mind boggles!

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Oh my, that would be a mess. How did her key work in a different car? Bizarre! Thanks so much for the excellent review.
reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 17-May-2022
    All will be revealed in my next post. (150 word flash fiction).
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol!! You made me feel much better. Twice I opened the passenger door to a startled stranger in the driver's seat. My husband warned me to notice that not all white SUVs are the same! They look the same to me!!

Now what I can't figure out is why I didn't get notified of this post when I know I "fanned" you. I didn't get notified of one of Nancy's posts either. So I'm wondering if this is some kind of test and I'm failing...

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Well, this is supposed to be a blind contest, so I suppose that would account for that. In any event, I understand exactly about the look of shock when you tried getting into the wrong car. I don't know if cell phones were around back then, but I'm sure the gal would have been tempted to call the cops, having some stranger attempting to get into her car. Thanks so much for the great review.
Comment from LisaMay
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I can relate to your story - I've seen this happen numerous times. Not to myself, as I have an older car with a distinctive colour (that year, so long ago, the colour was probably common). Rental cars especially mostly look the same.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thanks for the great review and comments. The car I have now is the same as about fifty others in town, same model, year and color. It makes life interesting.